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by sakuyalove

person Allys
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was really cool XD. I loved that you actually gave him new techniques and that he's been learning and co-operating with everyone XD. I L'dMAO when Sasuke knocked Konohamaru out XD *snicker*. And hey I'm really happy he showed up *hugs* Keep up the good work and I hope you update again soon XD.
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was kinda hoping for Tsunada to put up a better fight. Then again, that make out technique, only a lesbian wouldn't be effected by that. Even some of them. Hopefully Naruto will get his rightful place as Hokage. However, I wouldn't put it past at least one counsel to try something.
person PrplGrl
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's going very well.
I'm enjoying it very much!
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
woo hoo!!!!! challenge!!!!


This is all very exciting. Of course, if Naruto becomes Hokage, Sakura will never leave his side... This spells trouble for Sasuke. On the other hand, she still doesn't know about the Kyuubi. If she freaks and handles it wrong... well then that will just be the perfect opportunity for Sasuke to pounce! These are exciting times, indeed. ^^

Keep up the good work!
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, please?!?!?!?!?!?!? Update as soon as you can! Thank you. *deep bow*
person kitsune16487
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey ya! juz found da site...gotta tell ya dis...LOVE UR WORK!!! it's a bit slow (soorryyy) but i'm patient enuff to wait a bit...so, update soon kay?...cant wait for the next chap...

p/s: is there any way for you to alert me when the next chap is posted? i've yet to go thru the info here, or joining in if it's possible...would hate it if i miss the update...

arigato gozaimasu and happy new year!!
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry I hadn't reviewed! I want you to know that I love this story so far and can't wait for more...Do you have more motivation now? Remember, false motivation is better than no motivation! Now give me more Last Chance!
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hurry to the next ch and the sasu/naru dump sakura
person Kalypso
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story. I like the fact that you are giving it more depth than just setting the main pairing up right at the begining of the story. It has really drawn me into the whole story and feelings of the characters.

Please update soon. :)
person Nanaka
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm reading! and love the story so far. Haven't reviewed my self cause im lazy. or did i review once? oh well. love the story so far, keep up the good work.