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for Last Chance

by sakuyalove

schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me Naruto realizes there was more to the kiss than just him calling Naruto a woman!!!.. Gah!.. and Sakura needs to put it together and edge Naruto to be with Sasuke!!.. Please, please say Naruto has given up on Sakura!! PLEASE!!
person tash1021
schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
poor sasuke he love him so much he just want to see naruto happy **sniff sniff**
i love it
can't wait for the next update
person Anon
schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mm, what will Sakura do now? What's Naruto going to think now?
(By the way, I'm not probing you, the author, for information about the story; I'm just telling what my thoughts are. Just so you know. ^_^)
person kyuubikit
schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You.. nice job... i'm still wanting more ... it's beautiful really... can't wait to read naru-chan's reaction to the kiss... his real reaction.. ah.. greatness
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, sakura sure is mean in this chapter..anyways i wonder whats going to happen next? Please cotninue writing, i'm looking forward to your next update! :)
person Kimra
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done. I await more. :)
person riddlestar
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well written. i like it. the chapters could be longer though..hehe. looking forward to your next update. :D
person tash1021
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wait sasuke isn't the type of person that oblivious to his surroundings
he did that to break any chance naruto had with sakura!!
person Anon
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NOW what's he gonna do...? (*Ahem*) Anyways, I thought that was a little weird for Sasuke, I thought he'd be sharper than that.
schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww...please motto motto... I really wanted to read more of this. I was looking forward to seeing how far Naruto would take the sasuke act ...and how Sasuke would steal his precious little blond fox's heart...among other things... though i was hoping you'd go SasuNaru rather than the other way around...Naruto is such an adorable uke.