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for Last Chance

by sakuyalove

person Sigart
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loooooove!

Okay, so I don't think Naruto could actually pull that off, he's too easy to excite, but DAMNIT if it doesn't suit him ^^ I want to know the jutsu he was studying... I think it would create more believability that he actually was studying and understood the scroll... Yeah. But still. I liked it. A lot. Sakura thinking Naruto was an impostor was brilliant.
person kataru
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well you know, when someone with at least some face, chasing and bothering almost in your lifetime then all of the sudden, he/she halted, then it would be like an alienated day. Specially if he/she's been doing the chasing for almost your entire life.

yeah, kinda somehow missed the feeling, and specially if it's just one person doing that on you. :p
person tash1021
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...why is susuke help naruto if he's in love with him
this story is so cute update soon
person Anon
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So he's got her attention. Wow. I wonder what Sasuke's going to think about all this...?
schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This sounds really interesting so far...though i have one question is it going to be a narusas or a sasnaru? either way, its still going to be good! Please continue writing. im looking forward to your next update!
person weeeee
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like it, it's good but you spelled sasuke's last name wrong it's uchiha.
person Anon
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, not bad. I'm curious to see how well Naruto pulls the act off--that would be interesting. And if he's good at it, how will Sakura react. Somehow I kinda have my doubts--the way he ran off at the end... but, well, that's for me to find out. ^^
person mel
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like what you've written so far and I look forward to the next chapter.
person Kitsune19
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This looks like it will have a good plot. hope you update soon and see where it gose :).
person kataru
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm hmmm kind of nice. want to read more of this.

So what to say, as always.
-next chap XD