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XD yay i loved this! T.T there should be a sequal. >.> with sasuke pregnant... he still needs to have a child right. the council said so. WHINES!

awew how cute every1 is happy^.^
now they can for fill naruto little fantasy **evil smile**

Hmm so I see Sakura is as conniving as always. Naruto is going to be upset if/when he finds out she is using this supposed pregnancy to back him into marrying her. Loved the smut in this chapter and I am happy to see that Sasuke is willing to take some control over the situation as far as telling Sakura about them. Because he cares about her Naruto is too kind to tell her he doesn't want to marry her. And I hope Hiroshi gets what he has coming to him!

Aww thanks for updating i was waiting for this story to be updated :D great job i love sasnaru. ohh is something horrible going to happen to sakura please say yes *puppy eyes* cant wait until the next update.

Che. Sasuke, you're too forgiving. I'd have killed him. Then left. Or punched him, left, then let him wallow in the guilt. *is mean* XD. But yeah, I dunno what I was hoping for. I loved the lemon, but I was also thinking... Naruto is indecisive (which just hurts everybody), and admits to loving Sakura... I mean... I was expecting more hurt maybe? Cause that is a rough thing to hear...

ha! little does sasuke realize that sakura already knows about the two of them and she's not going anywhere! mwhahahahahahahahaha!


Honestly, I can't wait! ^^ Keep up the good work!

I'm glad Sasuke isn't giving up on Naruto! Whew, I was scared for a little bit! If I had to choose between the two I would pick Sasuke in a heartbeat.
Great chapter! So hot and drool worthy!

Chapter 23: Err, I hate to say it, but I thought Sasuke reacted a little too quickly to Naruto’s outburst and revelation. And, uh, I thought Sasuke would want to know why instead of just . . . I dunno. I just thought he reacted to everything too fast. . . . “Twitched his neck to the left?” What was that? (*confused*) . . . . Um, you spelled “raping” as “rapping.” . . . . Also, does Naruto know the difference between sexual desire and love? . . . . Alright, I really like it when Sasuke figures out why the slowness and then turns the tables on Naruto. ^^ . . . . What I love is how unsure you make the audience of, “Is Sasuke going to screw Naruto? Or is he going to make Naruto screw him?” ^^ . . . . Pssh. That’s not love, Naruto. That’s desire. ¬_¬ . . . . Whoa. I loved it when Naruto’s eyes went red and he growled, but it went by too rushed. . . . But Sakura already knows about them; she found Sasuke’s shirt. And didn’t Naruto even reveal that to her? Does Naruto remember that he let it slip? I know he didn’t notice at the time, but maybe he remembered it later?

That's right, Sasu-kitty, you keep Naruto right where he belongs- in your arms. ^_^ Keep up the great work!

hey love your story and thank you for the updates