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February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Stinking, plotting, little, evil, Pink Bitch I swear that's low especially for her. Tell me sasuke kills her when he finds out.
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February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NoooOOOooooooOOOOOOOOOooooooooOOOOOOO~~~~ Not Naruto and Sakura!!!!! T_T Gimme back the NaruSasu love. An interesting chapter though, besides the het sex (mind I'm not against Het in general but just not NaruSaku >.>) So Sakura finally knows who Chiinu is...And I'm interested in seeing how Sasuke will react to what Naruto did in his absence <.< I can't believe Naruto still loves Sakura though *sigh* But I want to see where you'll take this so I shall continue reading ^^ Just please don't go into detail of what Naruto and Sakura do. =)
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No, she's not pregnant... make that slimy bitch get her hands off of him! *growls* I never have liked her, not in the anime, not manga, and not here either. Make her go away, make her go poof! AND NO SEX FOR THE SLUT EITHER NARUTO!
*walks off grumbling about the pink haired bitch*
*walks off grumbling about the pink haired bitch*
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*crying* awww damn i hate sakura even more, one of those stupid whores who lie about pregnancy to force the guy they want into committing, i hope she still doesn't get pregnant and has to come clean, sasuke deserves naruto not sakura *pukefest* lol anyways good work on the writing can't wait to see what happens next..happier if its sasunaru instead of sakunaru :s lol update soon please :)
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
God, I hate that bich of sakura!!! Don't let sakura have her wicked way with naruto...bring sasuke back to kick her ass!
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
***jumps up and down in angry tantrum***
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just kill Sakura, PLEASE. She is trying to get a baby in oder to bind Naruto to her, that bich. Please don't let this end in hurting Sasuke or Naruto. If someone deserves to get hurt its Sakura for first treating Naruto like shit and then suddently falling in love with him. Sasuke has loved Naruto for years, and Naruto has loved him, they deserve each other! Please don't let Sakura have a baby with Naruto, please! It would be fairer if she had children with Sasuke, children with Sharingan. And the former team 7 could rase them together...
ok, am not making any sence anymore. Good story, i hope there is a happy ending.
ok, am not making any sence anymore. Good story, i hope there is a happy ending.
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HHHHEHEHEHHEHEhhehehehhehhehehehehehhe =^^= my my my... Sakura is a sneaky little trollop! Was she already pregnant? Judging by her actions, I'm assuming she's not, but knows if she has him now it will be the perfect time to get knocked up! Clever girl. >:)
Of course, she's still going to have to make room in her bed for Sasuke. Not that she should mind, although I'm sure Sasuke might have a thing or two to say about it. Poor Naruto. I hope he's able to have his cake and eat it too.
Of course, she's still going to have to make room in her bed for Sasuke. Not that she should mind, although I'm sure Sasuke might have a thing or two to say about it. Poor Naruto. I hope he's able to have his cake and eat it too.
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
1!!!?1?!11?!?!!?!!one!?!one
Sakura, wtf!?! lol. Gah!
Sakura, wtf!?! lol. Gah!
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(I review as I read.)
Chapter 21: Nice first paragraph. Especially like the last two sentences of it. . . . Ino: “Well, the good thing [. . .]” That’s a good thing? Even to her? o.O . . . . Love the way Naruto simmered down after Ino’s attack. . . . Heh. Love Naruto’s problems with the clothes. ^^ . . . (*snicker*) “Hmmn, Naruto still hadn’t come back.” Hmmm, what is he doing in the shower?? XD . . . . Ooh, that is a nice bed. I wants it! =) . . . . (*snicker*) Love the hint about the other rope. Wish I could’ve seen it. ^^ . . . . Uh-oh, she found the shirt. X) . . . . O.O (*BLUSH!*) Naruto just walked in. . . . Interesting. Naruto openly mentioned Sasuke to Sakura. Guess he’s a little distracted. . . . Oh s***. Is she lying? õ_õ . . . . Oh mannnnnn, this is torture. (*groans*)
Alright, I won’t kill you yet. I don’t mind if this turns out into a threesome, but please, PLEASE let things work out okay for Sasuke! >.< Also, I’m not a Sakura-hater, but I’m a little torn. I don’t want her to be pregnant, but I don’t want her to lie to Naruto to get what she wants either. But then, it’s not my decision. (*sigh*) -_- Oh well, just please make it work out for everybody in the end! >.<
Chapter 21: Nice first paragraph. Especially like the last two sentences of it. . . . Ino: “Well, the good thing [. . .]” That’s a good thing? Even to her? o.O . . . . Love the way Naruto simmered down after Ino’s attack. . . . Heh. Love Naruto’s problems with the clothes. ^^ . . . (*snicker*) “Hmmn, Naruto still hadn’t come back.” Hmmm, what is he doing in the shower?? XD . . . . Ooh, that is a nice bed. I wants it! =) . . . . (*snicker*) Love the hint about the other rope. Wish I could’ve seen it. ^^ . . . . Uh-oh, she found the shirt. X) . . . . O.O (*BLUSH!*) Naruto just walked in. . . . Interesting. Naruto openly mentioned Sasuke to Sakura. Guess he’s a little distracted. . . . Oh s***. Is she lying? õ_õ . . . . Oh mannnnnn, this is torture. (*groans*)
Alright, I won’t kill you yet. I don’t mind if this turns out into a threesome, but please, PLEASE let things work out okay for Sasuke! >.< Also, I’m not a Sakura-hater, but I’m a little torn. I don’t want her to be pregnant, but I don’t want her to lie to Naruto to get what she wants either. But then, it’s not my decision. (*sigh*) -_- Oh well, just please make it work out for everybody in the end! >.<