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February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh heavens above, please off Sakura, I so do not like her. *sighs* The only reason she is with Naruto now isn't because of love, but because of her love of power. *growls at pinky*
Wonderful update even if I do hate pinky. Ja ne.
Wonderful update even if I do hate pinky. Ja ne.
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February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving the NaruSasu love, very hot. Not so interested in a threesome with Sakura though >.> Ok ok, I'm not a big fan of Sakura but I guess depends on how she's written. But in general I don't like any more than two at a time ^^ I wonder what Sakura's gonna do when/if she finds out the Sasuke's Chiinu. And Sasuke's so hot~, hope you don't take too long for Sasuke to travel to Suna and back because that means there won't be as much lovin' =D But I'm really excited to read more. Squee! Love this fic heaps ^___^
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February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh My! In Love with 2 people..What is poor Naruto Gonna do? HEHEHEHE XD
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February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GAH!! Get Sakura out of your head Naruto! She's no good for you and you have to think only of Sasuke *hypnotizes* I can only hope that Naruto does not let lust overrun himself and he ends up getting Sakura pregnant! I would never forgive you Naruto! Hahaha, okay but on another note, I really am enjoying this story and I'm really glad that Naruto has finally opened his eyes to the one who has been there for him! Hopefully Sakura will get out of the picture soon! Keep up the excellent work!
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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooh-ho-ho... looks like Naruto's hiding something. A little merger secret perhaps?? Naruto's definitely getting more and more fox-like as this thing goes on.
I love this story. =^^= (excellent smut,btw)
I love this story. =^^= (excellent smut,btw)
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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 19: He’s beat, eh? . . . This is sweet, Naruto looking at Sasuke while Sasuke sleeps. Awww, and then the little kiss. :heart: . . . (*snort*) I love what Naruto’s really looking at. X) . . . (*blinks*) That was fast. . . . (*pant*pant*) . . . Hee hee, “He haphazardly tossed the soap, not caring where it went.” That sounds really funny to me for some reason. XD . . . (*snort*) Oh jeez, and the cold water comes on. XDD . . . Alright, right where they left off. . . . Spooky image of Naruto like that. (*shivers*) . . . Evidently not, Sasuke, he wants you to sleep with him. ^_^
Okay, the chapter was pretty cute. A nice extra dose of lemon is always welcome. But I’m still wondering about Sakura. She was a major part in this story; she can’t just disappear from it, can she?
Okay, the chapter was pretty cute. A nice extra dose of lemon is always welcome. But I’m still wondering about Sakura. She was a major part in this story; she can’t just disappear from it, can she?
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story! Sasuke's earlier attempts to help out Naruto and Sakura were very cute (I'm a sucker for the self-sacrificing, love-from-afar thing). One little note though, about the last chapter; soap is *bad* lube. Seriously, no one wants that in any delicate orifices. Other than that small pet peeve the smut was delicious. ^^
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Naruto sure loves messing with Sasuke! Another great chapter!
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh...I laughed so hard when Sakura thought Naruto was an impostor. This is hilarious.
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a very strong Naruto. You don't get to read about that kind often. I love it.