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for Slow dancing in a burning room

by knize16

person EmmPeace
schedule September 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this story!!!
person chester
schedule August 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if you will get this or if you are still writing. I just want to say that I love this story. There's something so compelling about it and it makes you want to read the next chapter and you want to know what will happen with the characters. Please don't listen to what other people write about your characters, plot line or even smut scenes. Just write what you feel. And that nonsense about seme/uke is just that. To me, they are equal partners. Please don't get discouraged and continue to write what you feel is true to you. I hope that you get this and that someday you will finish this. Till then, I will be waiting anxiously as a fan.
person hisoka
schedule December 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
adorable just adorable.things come together slowly but together none the less things are looking up for the...uchiha family...uzumaki family? who knows all that matters is that haruhi maybe having more siblings as she wanted soon when ever sasuke comes back.well hope you can update soon its one of the better stories ive read in a long time keep it up
schedule July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i just read this story for the first time and i'm hooked! Pleas do continue!
schedule July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really do love this story. Update soon. I'm interested to see where you take the story. You're very talented writer, and this story has me hooked. I just have one question. How are they going to explain Hairuhi to the villagers. I mean Itachi and Sasuke are the only ones. Are they just going to say this is Sasuke's daughter and they left him to Naruto? I was just a little confused on that part.

Vanillaxrain
person hisoka
schedule July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good thing sasuke listend to his instincts or he would have never notice that it was naruto,soes he even know he has a daughter yet?their gonna be a happy family soon yay for togetherness.hope you can update soon
schedule July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. I love Haruhi and the personality you've given her. Also, I like that Naruto has been truthful with her from the start, and that Naruto still loves Sasuke and it isn't one of those angst-because-Sasuke-was-a-dick-but-now-he-has-their-kid types. Also, it's refreshing to read an Mpreg where the seme/uke lines also manage to not be set in stone. =)

Your writing is also wonderful. I can really feel the emotions of Haruhi, Naruto, and Sasuke. I had tears in my eyes at a couple points.

Keep up the good work!

~ lg
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I seriously had to take a second look at this fic... the title looked too familiar, and when I read the summary I knew I had read this before. It really took me a moment before I was smiling like an idiot, when I realized that this was a fic I had fallen in love with and thought would never update again. You just made me a very happy girl with this update. Yes yes... I going kiss you right now.

This chapter was really just too cute. Plus it's always nice to see some loving between Sasuke and Naruto. Although I think the highlight for me was when Haruhi told Naruto to take a shower. xD If only she knew what her father had been doing earlier that day.

Now I look forward to them seeing Tsunade... and seeing anyone else along the way. Makes me wonder what everyone will say when they learn that Naruto is Haruhi's father... more so, I can't wait till Naruto breaks the news to Sasuke... if he even plans too.

Please! Please, update this as fast as you can... It really would be a shame to see this sorta die again. *hugs*

-Akiru-
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww i really love this story with the adorable Haruhi and even Inari.:D I like the plot too so i really cant wait to read on more.:D
person a kitsunes light
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!! Im sooo happy you updated!!!! I hope yopu can do it again soon!!!
I wanna read about when haruhi was created and find out if he is gonna tell haruhi about his encounter with sasuke!