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I love the story so far

please update! This story is great! I wanna know what happens next!!! Sasuke will meet naruto after all this time, will he tell him about their daughter?? Please update!

Hey I like your story. When I read it, it got me all happy and stuff.

Anyway, I was just looking at your porfile and I understand.

For me, I an also a writer but some say my grammer and spelling needs work. Anyway, If you want, I got a story named love's confession and I had to really work on it.

But, It's fixed but they said it was crappy and junk. So, it took me forever to fix it. and I got some other stories that I am going to work on later this month. If you want, look at my profile and see for yourself.

But, this story of yours; loved it.

Hope you update, Thanks
:D

Thank you.

I really like this story. I hope you write again soon

Oh no! What a way to end! I loved all of Naruto's inner musings... they were great. And now Sasuke is awake. I can't wait!

Great chapter. Great use of all five senses, and having naruto exploring his surroundings while he is still half asleep. Cant wait for the next chapter.

Very nice. I've always found that creating original characters has some very tough challenges to overcome, but you've managed it admirably. Haruhi is adorable, while still somehow being Sasuke's daughter. It is an odd combination, though it works to your advantage. I eagerly await the next chapter.

a/j

Thanks for the new chapter and the flashback! Can't wait to see the actual smut! :D

Loved the chapter.

I can understand how you feel about writing the sex scenes... I also put that part off for as long as I can... but sometimes the easy way to do it is just be vague and use metaphors and stuff... that is if you don't like getting into graphic detail. Either way I am sure everyone will like it.

Can't wait for the next update.

-Akiru-