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for Slow dancing in a burning room

by knize16

schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am loving your story, it's so well written! Hope the next update is not too far off.
schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nooooo... finally, confrontation! I love it. I can't wait. Will Sasuke be fooled. Boy, if he is he should rethink the whole going after his brother thing. If he can sense his dobe then really... Can't wait! Until the next.
schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GAHHH!!! Leaving it like that...meanie!!!
person nawatia
schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Wonderful story so far! It drew me right in!!!
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like the story so far....please continue with it ^__*
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god. This story is so adorable. Really. Its very touching.

Keep up the good work! ^^
person nm1716
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i rarely ever read mpreg. there's only one other that i do read, and i read a hell of a lot of fics. this i decided to check out because i like your title. i'm glad i did. it's very good and i really really really hope you'll update soon. kudos to you for me liking this. i'm extremely picky. ;)
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the story. I really feel for Haruhi (and Naruto). I hope her wish comes true (cause that would be the ultimate happy ending). *squeels at the thought*

I really like your writing and I can't wait for the next up dat ;)
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really and absolutely adored this chapter.

It was so beautiful. I love that little girl to pieces! You have made her the most perfect blend of her parents, both in looks and personality. Though she certainly tends towards her Uchiha side. Lol. She's heartrending, especially when she's sitting by the window singing.

And Naruto...I just love your Naruto! He's so perfectly him and IC and I'm awed. Really, its just wonderful. I can't wait to read more. Your Kyuubi is so awesome. Loving the interaction b/t the three of them soo soo much!

I'm so excited for your next update!