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for Slow dancing in a burning room

by knize16

person susanna
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Like it! And now they are going home... Can't wait for news about Sasuke.
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a really well written story and I love all the detail that is put into it. Great job and I hope to see more chapters in the future.
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story!! Love Haruhi! She's a great cross between Naruto and Sasuke. I sure hope the little girl gets her wish! :)
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really hope you write the next ch soon
person susanna
schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I like it. Naruto and his daughter are great - it's nice to see how he does his best to be a good father to her, and as it seems, she does not exploit the fact that he adores her, but is a loving girl as well.

I have some questions however: Is he living in the Wave Country? Did he get his child there? And is Inari's mother really called Tsunami? (After the disaster around Christmas some years ago?)
person LadyWolf
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to read more!!!!
person LadyWolf
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to read more!!!!
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
am droppin a review, and am wantin to see what happens. haruhi is cute! good oc; it is rare to find a good pc.
person Anon
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great first chapter!! Please continue!!!
person hpn827
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great start. I'm definitely interested.