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Awesome, awesome, awesome beginning! I can't wait for more. I love their daughter and the relationship she has with Naruto. It's unusual to see a Naruto being forthcoming with who the other "daddy" is. This is much, much better. I just can't see Naruto lying to his children like that. Can't wait for more.

wow! that's cool... please update soon..

wonder what happened... between naruto and sasuke... hmmm.. enyweiz..

iluvit! [^_^]

Yay. I vote for more. :D

Me too~! Me too~! I vote for more as well! <333

Aiiiieeee!!!

OMG, if you don't give me more soon I will die! DIE, I tell you!!!

That was...I don't even have words...it was surreal.

The beauty and depth of the emotions you portrayed so simply and yet so clearly are beyond description. You could feel every twinge of emotion the two were feeling as if it were your own. And your characterization was perfect. Naruto was very IC despite the very different background. You managed to give him the perfect mix of bubbly exuberance and inherent sweetness blended with the occasional sad passing thought that is so him. And Haruhi is so perfect. I'm dumbfounded how a four year old has such a developed Uchiha personality and yet still manages to remain child like and innocent. Kudos.

So yeah, back to what I was saying before....MORE!!!!

You must feed the addiction now!

*huggles!*

you are going to update right? PLEASE!

Great start. Love the relationship you show here between Naruto and his daughter. Can't wait to see what you do with this. Keep up the good work and take care.

littleolmee
littleolmee2002@yahoo.com

This is fabulous!! More soon please!!
Slave

Please continue this. I don't usually review but I really want to see what happens next, so update soon.

-Akiru-

Yes...this is going to be good. Just don't give me too many heart spasams on the way to making them happy together. Great start.