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November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very interesting i hope you update soon
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November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, very well written, very detailed and i can't wait to read more
but i just wanted to point out that kakashi didn't go into the water with his mask on, he wrapped a towel around the bottom part of this face and i think on top of his head lol
but i just wanted to point out that kakashi didn't go into the water with his mask on, he wrapped a towel around the bottom part of this face and i think on top of his head lol
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November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice start - I like it so far. Can't wait to see what happens once Sasuke shows up. And poor Naruto having to raise Haruhi by himself, will the Konoha Shinobi discover him as well? So sad that he had to give up his dream of being Hokage to become a missing-nin :(
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November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. I could find no fault in your writing. So expect to read another chapter soon.
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November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw their daughter is too cute! Update soon, I want to know why Sasuke hasn't found his family yet!!!!
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November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very cool can't wait to read more.
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