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for Lights, sex and destiny

by KageKitsuneXXX

person Kerrisa
schedule January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A little ways into this I realized I had read this fic before, it must have been when you first posted it, back when I was horrible at leaving reviews, but I've read it again and I'm sure I enjoyed this time as much as I did last time! *Cue "Collective Awe" for that ending* To write such sweet fics you must be a sweet person! Can i dunk you in my coffee?

Fave Line:

"When Naruto reappeared, all golden god with a feral smile, Sasuke completely forgot what it was he was supposed to tell him."

Lol so much for being "an eternal seme." He's just too good at being uke, both a screamer AND a cuddler? Where can I get one? I want an uke of my own! D=!! The smut was hottttt! Imma have naughty thoughts in my head for the rest of the day! Heaven forbid some adorable japanese international student wanders into the college bookstore i work in runs off feeling thoroughly violated after he catches me leering at him over his textbooks and undressing him with my eyes... Lol that would be funny though xD

Imma take a break in reading your marvelous fiction for school stuffs >_< Boo! But I 'spose it can't be helped V_V XOXOXs Kei-Chan
person Anon
schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. Smut was hot!!

BTW its divali not diwali
person hsbs
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOTNESS! Naruto is the smex. What a God. And now Sasuke is his Uke for life! yeahhhhh :) I laughed when Baruto made him compare the size of his finger to another probing apendage! ha ha ..cop that..

Also love how they wanted to stay lip locked during the finale - I can feeeeel the lurve
person Imagy
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I swear, this totally needs to be continued..
it's just too amazing to stay as a one shot~!
^o^
person charmpit
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know, I felt like a fly on the wall in that hotel room reading this fic. This is good stuff.
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeah, that was fun!

ok, you know this can continue, hmmm?
person lo
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was wonderfully written. I loved the story and what you did with the characters. Just a great great effort went into this.
person kataru
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like sasUKE's trademark moodswings.
hmmm the character that's best of him.
person Adi
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!!!!!!!

KK WROTE ME SMUT!!!!

Oh babe, it was beautifully written, I loved the Sasuke perspective of Naruto,

I love how Naruto conned Sasuke, he was too cute, and sexy and funny and GAH! Just the way Naruto should be in his perfect way!

The whole Destiny thing was so cute, so stupidly cute. And LOL! When Sasuke kept stopping so that Naruto could catch up XD I loved it! It still had your amazing humor with it, but it had a serious romantic tone too which was gorgeous to read

AND THE KISSING!! ASDFGHJKLZXCVBNMQWEITUPWORUYREPOYUG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I don't know how you managed to pinpoint my weak spot, but you hit it head on!

*squishes the KK* lol I love how Sasuke is "just dinner" and then bam next scene and its smexing! AND THE SMUT! *goes all fangirl again* with the hotness... O_O and the kissing... and the hotness... and the preparation! and totally agreeing with Sasuke, THEY COULD HAVE DONE IT DRY! *sweatdrop* ok maybe not XD

poor Sasuke waking up alone, you had me going there for a moment and I thought it was gonna turn angst and I was gonna have to rip you a new one too but then Naruto, bless, *grins happily*

THANK YOU KK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person hina88
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
heh i definitely liked this - adi practically smacked it in my face to make sure I read it and don't tell her this but I'm glad she did, haven't read a good smutty one shot in a while and I really like your brand of humour, I was grinning through most of that and the other part you can guess I was drooling. anyway, thank you for this i loved the ending too!!! heheh sasuke-teme ended up following our blond ^_^ awwww *glomps* anyway, yeah, liked it!!!!

Hina xXxx