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I have to admit that this is actually one of very few PWPs that I actually like and find myself reading now and then *chuckle*
The way you write Sasuke and Naruto is my favourite way. Manly, snarky, and in character. *smile* Thank you.

bit fast to move in isnt it..

(I review as I read.)

(*blinks*) Wow. That opening was . . . startling. It’s a little hard to picture Itachi as the punk that first paragraph portrays him as, but it’s an interesting experience. . . . I wonder why Itachi doesn’t get the beer himself. . . . Yeesh. Why did Itachi make the stakes so high? And why’s Sasuke just taking that crap? õ_o
Sooo, does Sasuke have some sort of abusive relationship with his brother? I still don’t get why he takes it. . . . And Itachi’s apparently an alcoholic. . . . Heh. Love this fantasy Sasuke’s getting, starting with how natural the blond might be. . . . I like the details about how the whiskers went from silly to sexy in Sasuke’s mind. . . . That’s cute, Naruto’s got a bit of a soft spot for kids. . . . I kinda like the exchange between Sasuke and Naruto; the challenges they issue to each other. . . . You know, I’m kind of at a loss for words here. There’s a feeling of OOCness, but at the same time the story’s hot in a playful way. The dangerous playfulness. Though Itachi doesn’t sound like much fun to be around. Sasuke’s small sex history was interesting to read about; I can’t really picture it of him, but what the hell, it’s entertaining. . . . Heheh, I love how purpose melts into sexual distraction, then he’s brought back to the present again. And I like his little thoughts in between the hot smoochies. . . . Man, that’s a lot of toys. (This is going to destroy another part of my mind, isn’t it? Ah, well, at least this time I’m willing to smash it.) . . . . Like I said, why the HELL can’t Itachi get his own damn beer HIMSELF?? And why the HELL is Sasuke putting up with Itachi’s crap?? . . . . I like all the animal innuendos towards Naruto. . . . So did Sasuke get to spar with his brother, later, or did Itachi stiff him?

Well. That was one of the stranger stories I’ve read. It reminds me of stuff I’d find more in the gay erotica anthologies in bookstores rather than something on AFF. Not a criticism, just an observation. It’s got that rougher quality of the published stories rather than fanfiction on the net.

OMG!!! I am oficially a perv! But I really like it! Is there gonna be another chpater? Because I noticed they didn't use the ginger!

Thanks for the damn hot and very well written story!!! Poor Sasu... Getting a black eye for not being able to buy Itachis favorite beer. I like your Sasuke. So much in character! My favorite sentence was: “Stay. Stay the night, stay the whole fucking weekend. Stay forever if you want.” So intense, so desperate in a way it hurts.

That was the most hilarious piece of smex I've read in a while. And so kinky too! *perverted smile*

that was F-ing hot. *fans herself*. why didn't they use the toys naruto bought? WHY, WHY? dear lordy, please make there be a sequel. double thumbs up, lol.

eeeeeehhhh...? Naruto bigger than Sasuke!?... oO =___= no way! But that was good story, uke naruto is always the best~~ ;] cuuuutee...

oh my fuck, can I please use expletives to express my gratitude for this hotness? holy freakin god, I can't take it, must reread immediately. o.m.f.g. seriously. Hmm... normally I might name some things I liked: how about the whole freaking thing. Ah okay, the shopping, the 'do you want this cock in your ass,' the fact that Sasuke didn't know who Sakura was, etc etc etc. I like that he says 'this cock' and not 'my cock.' I dunno why. Look I gotta go reread it now, retyping your same words I read not 5 minutes ago is giving me an insane urge that I can't explain. thanks for the hotness xoxoxoxo

Despite some of the heavier disturbing content mixed in with this barrel of hot fluff. I loved every minute of it and laughed at some of the obsurdity within it and loved the hotness of the sex.

I don't know if you would want to continue this story but, I definitely would read it if you wrote it.

Hot and hotter.