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by Hestia

schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww so cute! I love it when the guy gets...the guy, lol And Itachi the voyeur, well we all know that he can't get any. Amazing sex, sizzling, just SCORCHING! Loved it.
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutley stunning! You make writing complete brilliance seem easy. Have i told you how glad i am that you're back? I don't think i can say it enough. The Master has returned!!
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
most def one of my all time fav fics! the first few lines itachi said had my mouth hanging open in shock (for someone who jerks off that much you have no balls LOL) cracked me up son! I absolutely LOVE a strong willing uke naruto, its just so much hotter than whiny girly type (tho they have a place in my heart too :D) Oh and how could i forget 'TwoStroke?!' LMAO!!! Jesus i was hyperventilating i laughed so hard, i was like 'no day my yout' lol AAhh it was just all around goodness, pleasant distraction from the studying i'm SUP to be doing online. gracias!
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn, that was hot! Thanks for this one, it sooo made my day ^_^ (and gave my imagination more fodder)
person DesperadoSweetie
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL.. I love that last line. This was so cute. I really enjoyed this.
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was the best sex I've read in a long time. Thanks you so much for sharing. I had started to get pissed at the Sasuke/Naruto paring but I love it again thanks to you.
person Rosebud
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was HOT!!!
person cynaga
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Always a pleasure to read your work Hestia. This one-shot was a delight. u r the best! :D
person totaltruth
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooooo HOT!
person llyoung
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was hot. Loved the items they bought in the store and that they used most of them.