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for The Bet

by Hestia

schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG, you are soo my favorite person ever!

I loved this. I love everything you write. Love, love, love!!!

I just got home and I have a terrible cold and I was feeling all down on myself and then I saw this and saw that you had written it and now I feel so much better! Seriously, your fics are better than meds!

It was sooo incredibly HOT and sexy and ooh, the ending! *squee*

Love, love, love!
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
um.. "In addition to a dozen packets of instant ramen and a big bag of potato chips, he had put in his basket a can of whipped cream, a bottle of chocolate sauce, a few pieces of ginger root, a cucumber, and a packet of clothespins!"

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!

*wipes tears from eyes*

That was hot and funny and nearly killed me. My foster sisters and I use to play this game and come up with the weirdest 3 - 4 item shopping list (how this started is a long and funny story). Anyway... YOU WIN!

Thanks for the awesome fic.
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very very hot. That was awesome. I love how naruto yelled at Itachi. Thou I'm a little sad that they didn't use the ginger, chocolate sauce, cucumber and wipe cream. Oh well maybe next time. ;P

=)
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome. I loved how Naruto would loose it whenever anyone mentioned that he might be a cat. ;) And I love a sneaky, plan ahead Naruto. Mission accomplished!
person Allys
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit yes!! buy a gag, and a studded rubber dildo with a harness, strap it into Naruto and make Sasuke bounce on that big, big cock!! Goddess have I told you how much I missed you?? *Glomps* You have no idea. THANK YOU!!! *kisses feet*. You rock my world! So happy to have you back ♥
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha! Brilliant! Pity the clothespins and ginger didn't come into play but I still loved it!
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yumm!
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now that was fun!
person Kimra
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kinky bastard. :P Nicely written, and... well it was good. I enjoyed reading it, adn am entirely amused. :D