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This is an awesome story! I am sorry that I have not reviewed before, I just always seem to read this story at around midnight so by the time I am done I am exhausted... but that is not really an excuse and I feel really bad for not encouraging you with a review!
I love how even though Naruto is a working citizen he is still the Naruto will all know and love^^ I have never read a story where Sasuke is insane like this, I really like it. A city inside his own mind (like Kyuubi inside of Naruto) and he is caught in between what he believes is real, and what actually is. It is interesting to see Sasuke (from Konoha)... I wonder what is going to happen when he finds out that he is actually from an insane asylum..? It will be interesting to see how Naruto deals with him. Awesome job, keep writing^^
~Misery
(can you e-mail me when you up-date? wpjn_sanderson@hotmail.com)

Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.

Cute chapter, It really made me laugh! The sock hunt was ingenious. That was very imaginative on your part. I also really like the end mini-episodes, I believe I forgot to praise you on that the last time I reviewed (That was my mistake! ^_^* ). Sasuke is a very perceptive person to notice Naruto's like of his other self.....too bad he is essentially nuts! On a different note, I didn't notice any errors this time (except for a few tiny grammar ones). Yay! Plus, I totally understand what you mean about the whole impatience thing. I myself cannot deal with overly imcompetent people. My friends sometimes call me a perfectionist.....ok well that's a lie! They actually call me "anal"! lol, I just tend to laugh it off (Like everything else in life). So, now that I've said my peace, I can't wait for your next installment!
-Jenn

I love this story so damn much. Two different Sasuke personalities..it justs keeps getting more and more interesting. I completely relate to what you said about the whole spell check, dictionary, google fiasco...I have unfortuantely been down that road many of times. I too learned how to spell awkward right along with you. Keep up the great work and sorry that you've had so many questions about this fic. I myself will ask none because I will keep reading to find the answers in the story itself...it makes the story much more surprising and interesting that way.

In chapter five, I liked Naruto’s summary to smart-Sasuke about scared-Sasuke.
Also, what’s the Rule of Three from? I’ve never heard of it before, but it sounds cool.
Aw, man, that was mean. "The blankets are eating me!" ... Very cruel. Naruto, I do not approve. u_u Sasuke, I don’t blame you for being scared/pissed.
I LOVED the Omake for chapter 5! XD

For chapter 6, I’d love to see a picture of Sasuke with the war-paint. And Sasuke, I’m sorry, but that sock story WAS very funny. ^^
Quantum physics and the dryer? What’s that, like space-time warp or something??
By the way, the Warrior Princess’s name is spelled "Xena," not "Zina." Just thought I’d mention it, no biggie. ^.^"
Like the "T-Vision"--that was cute. ^^
“The cat really WAS the demon incarnate...” Great line.
As for the Omake, I loved the last line.

I must say that it made me very happy and was surprised to see a dedication to lil old me! Thank you for that I really appreciate the gesture. I found this chapter very funny, and totally almost pissed my pants when the blanket almost "ate" Sasuke. It was so adorable when Sasuke really freaked out, he reminded me of a small child. It broke my heart to imagine him crying like that! Other than that, you had few grammatical errors and it took me a while to figure out what you meant by "aquard"......then I realized you meant awkward, which in itself is ironic considering how awkward the word is to spell! lol....If you still don't have a beta, I have a lot of extra time right now and would be happy to help out. But only if you want! So with all that said, Happy Writing!
-Jenn

That was just great. I think I like 'cave man Sasuke' better, he is adorable!

aquard should be spelled "awkward"


other than that, quite the enjoyable little chapter. Naruto has good timing on his jokes. hehehe

I can't believe you got so pissed over readers interpreting the story their own way. A little dramatic, much? HAHAHAHA I thought authors enjoy the power to keep people guessing. But you're a plotline cop, I guess. I am one of those people guilty of not reading the little messages before hand because I'm more interested in reading the story. I was enjoying the story then your little rant showed up and that made me crack up harder than the story. I'm already expecting you to take this light teasing the wrong way and start planning my murder. Great story so far, it’s very creative, especially the latest chapter. Maybe flattery will keep me alive long enough for the next one. hehheh

That was so funny! Poor Sasuke! Getting the crap scared out of him! Naroto is so mean! HAHAHAHA! I liked the episode....random buttons and what not! And Copy Ninja! LOL Thanks for updating and for the dedication! *steps up to podium* I would like to thank all the little people I had to step on to get here! *bows* Thank you! *BIG KISS*

Awaiting the next cute chapter,

*Lilith*