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person leanne
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think you have an interesting plot idea and the story is forming as it should, will look forward to your other chapters.
person bagelsan
schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'm ridiculously curious now. What is going on with Sasuke? Who is Naruto at the moment? Why is Kyuubi such a good bitchy cat? ^^ Truly, this fic has some serious potential; I personally *love* long stories, so you'll get no complaints from me if this thing goes forever! (I also like amnesiac, spaz!Sasuke... he's kinda having a bad week, from the sound of it :p) I really like it so far, so please write more!
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this story..its good so far! Please continue!
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new chapter! Naruto sure has his hands full! :)
person DesperadoSweetie
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is really good.

I am just curious as to what their ages are. I don't know if you will address that at some point in the story but sometimes it really helps (I don't know why).

Will this mostly revolve around Naruto and Sasuke or will others come into the story as well?

I look forward to your next update. This is a very interesting story.
person hisoka
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
does he really have amnesia or what,he was thinking coherantly before but now hes like a child.wonder how him and the cat will get along if they ever do.this took me longer to read because someone else had the computer but im glad i read it and i hope you update soon
person Dragon7
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!
person Anon
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Huh. Pretty good. And it's not too bad, even unbeta'd. I'd like to see how this turns out. I like the deal about the cat named Kyuubi; clever. ^^
person Dragon7
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it! It's very interesting and mysterious. Look forward to more of the story. :)