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i like this story and i hope it is long and prosperous. any way i hope you get to the naru/gaara love soon.

also why is there two Naruto: Innocence's

*snickers* riko... like hannah montana's riko! lol! looking foward to your next update.

oh this is just waaaay too funny. getting hit on my a 12yrold? did naru put tissues in his chest for boobs? cmon, is he REALLY that dense? well, ok, for the story to work yeah, he is. ;-). ok, so when he gets to suna, i take it gaara is going to jump him and send sand to scare off everyone else? any more pairings? will any of the kohona guys try to get some licks in too?

Wow. Your story just gave me a pretty good idea to use for my own fic and as a thank you I would like to help you out any way I can. Just contact me if you ever need some help with anything at all. My E-mail address is on my profile. Thanks again!

i love this it so cute ^.^
but when i when u said maid i though naruto would be dressed up in formal kimono allthough the French maid thing is cute a bit much but cute oh and naruto should have long hair
anyway i love it keep going
if i get anymore ideas I'll let you know

I have a suggestion! How about using spell check on your chapters? Also, it would be nice if the entire chapter was longer than, like, 2 paragraphs? You could combine all of your chapters into one, and it would still be ridiculously short. And you're running out of ideas? But the only idea you've gotten so far is Naruto in a French Maid's outfit? Well, let's see, I will come up with some ideas for you since you have none. ....hmm. Okay, Sasuke can be an A-hole who tries to steal Naruto away from Gaara. Sasuke can share a tent with Naruto since they are bff on the way to Suna, and at night while the others have gone grumbling to their tents and suspicious of Sasuke, he can seduce Naruto by using his Sharingan to hypnotize Naruto and put him in a mental world where he is extremely aroused and tied up with his ass in the air on a nice bed. He doesn't really do anything to Naruto's physical body, just all in his head, so he thinks it should be okay, but while they are both spaced out in the Sharingan sex spell, their physical bodies will still reflect their arousal, and Kiba will wake up smelling it. You can make up what happens next. :)

My beta has helped me throughout my story plus she hates SasuNaru maybe she could help you. Just look for the story Family Portrait the writer is my beta and shes got a head full of ideas I am sure she could help you

Oh! I'll be happy to help give you ideas! I love fic since it first started and was very happy that you updated!

the story is cute and funny, please update soon