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for A Heartfelt Fuck

by chilepie

schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww....poor things. -hugs them both- It made me sad. I wish it didn't have to end like that tho.... It was really good tho. Nice job.
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great Story! Thanks
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I adore the way you've made Sai so oblivious that even Naruto's idiot ass can tell what he's feeling before he does! Very in character! Loved the description and the sex was very realistic, making Sai not completely enjoy himself was a nice touch.
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was sad. Want to cry.

cool story

=)
person shai69
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I ejoyed this fic. A lot of good description with the emotions in the story. Great job :)
person Raineko
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe you ended it like that. It was good though..........I just wish it didn't end like that.