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for Lace

by Kigen

schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me you're gonna show us what he has in mind for the kage bunshins.
schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lace was GREAT! :D
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schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, that was so hot. And utterly in character. I normally don't read SasuNaru, but this was just so bloody awesome. The way you write Naruto and Sasuke is just perfect. And it was so sexy!

*wants to see what Naruto has planned with Bunshin no Jutsu* XD Again, this is awesome! Great story! ^^
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was very good yuri; I... enjoyed...it very much XD
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well that was interesting though i would think that Sasuke would be on top in that kind of thing or may a third party could have been brought in but all in all pretty good and better then most
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More would be my demand, maybe some different toys and some roleplay to spice things up.
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
o.O Now that was rather interesting. I normally don't read anything dealing with yuri related things, but I have to admit, I didn't mind this as much as I thought I would. Like I said already, it was interesting. XD And do you plan on actually writing something to follow up with those bunshin? ^o^ heheh Well, kudos for making me not mind reading yuri as much now. ^^