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How could Kakashi think that? This was the Iruka that openly admitted to Kakashi making every muscel in his body hurt without realising the implications. Aw I feel sorry for him now. Tired Iruka isn't the one to be asking for a relationship then huh? Poor thing, he's not gonna try now, aw and he'll be all upset when Iruka pulls off his prank :C
I gotta get to the next chapter, man I love this story. It's so ...

i.this story was so nice and fluffy and smutty.. at one point, where Kakashi was rubbing iruka's wrist , the moment was so soft i felt a tingle run through me, when i get a chance i'm SO ordering that doujinshi!

This is so exciting *snugsu* I'm so happy for you, it's been a long time coming :) I've seen the pages you've posted at the comms and stuff and it looks to be really amazing, definitely very talented people working on this.^^ I just wanted to wish you luck and hope you get many, many orders and are completely swamped with fans at Otakon, it must be such a fun thing to see your story turned into something like this ^_^

Alright. I've read hundreds of KakaIru fics before, both on AFF and FF. I've seen some very good ones, one that sucked, and ones that have blown my mind away.

This is the best KakaIru fic I've ever read, and I'll tell you why.

They don't instantly jump eachother's bones. You've kept them in character, which takes incredible patience and skill, and every KakaIru fic I've seen makes Kakashi seem at LEAST slightly OCC or Iruka a whacked-out woman. You show how they get tossed together (by the lady Hokage no less), how they build up their 'friendship', and then how it goes from close friends to lovers. This is brilliant.

And then the actual Lemon is great. I liked the part especially where Kakashi says "And I'm all yours. You are never getting these back. Ever." And tucks the boxers under the mattress. That was a brilliant line, along with the "My ears are declaring war on your sides". You have excellent descriptions, your grammar is actually correct (trust me, that really counts. Do you know how many authors write like trolls?) and your creativity is off the map.

I hope you add a companion piece or a similar story with Iruka as seme sometime. I would really like to see that.

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That was freaking awesome!!! I loved Iruka's prank. I need some chakra wires and shit man. I'd have a freakin feild day. Very sexy, very cute, very funnt, and just overall incrediably entertaining. I love it.
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YOur story is just hilarious. I love how the story developed. That was a beautiful ending. Is this the ending or do you plan to write more on this story. It's a wonderful story. Great job.

hilarious i'm so glad i decide to read this

This was one of the best stories i've ever read! Wow. I loved how long you made me wait for them to get together, the way they slowly grew closer and iruka's little wet dream about kakashi made me blush deeper than i've blushed since i read my first yaoi story. Amazing work! really, wow. I'm going to add this to my list of stories to read again and again.
Cheers
meg

Oooooooh that was just great. It was funny and fluffy. I loved the ending too

OMG CUTE ending! Love it!