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January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really cute story!
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December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for filling in the blanks!!! Now I will be able to sleep! ^_^
I love the Christmas story, too and can't wait for the sequel.
sorahi
I love the Christmas story, too and can't wait for the sequel.
sorahi
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December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story, but I have a question... In the following paragraph....
They set about stringing the wire and making sure every. It was while they were stringing the wire through the hall that Iruka discovered the reason Pakkun was so eager to get the place free of spiders. The wire snapped and Pakkun tumbled backwards right into a spider web. "Get it off me! Get it off me!" he screamed terror laced through his voice.
What is supposed to be after "making sure every"? every what? Sorry, to trouble you, but I know it will stick in my head and I'll end up dwelling on it. I probably need more distractions, lol. Thanks, sorahi
They set about stringing the wire and making sure every. It was while they were stringing the wire through the hall that Iruka discovered the reason Pakkun was so eager to get the place free of spiders. The wire snapped and Pakkun tumbled backwards right into a spider web. "Get it off me! Get it off me!" he screamed terror laced through his voice.
What is supposed to be after "making sure every"? every what? Sorry, to trouble you, but I know it will stick in my head and I'll end up dwelling on it. I probably need more distractions, lol. Thanks, sorahi
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November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!!! That was the best Kakashi/Iruka fanfic ever!!!! You have to right more fanfics about them!!!!
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November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice story. i enjoyed it very much.
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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!! It was so entertaining and good! Im just so im love! XD
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November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved how you built up their relationship in this story and had them work through their feelings, and the fact it ended in yummy smut was a nice bonus! The joke Iruka came up with to play on Kakashi was too funny and a squealing Pakkun afraid of spiders was just utterly adorable and the ending was just great, poor Neji he's just so hard done by ;)
It was a really wonderful story the humour between the two was perfect, especially between Iruka and Kakashi when they finally slept together it all came across so well, I really enjoyed reading this! ^_^
It was a really wonderful story the humour between the two was perfect, especially between Iruka and Kakashi when they finally slept together it all came across so well, I really enjoyed reading this! ^_^
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November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love you.
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November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well this will show AFF that they can't keep a good story down. Hee, hee can't get the other one fixed just repost it. Loved the lemon. Gee can't them two do anything without people watching and betting? It seems Iruka got over his fears towards Kakashi and Kakashi has figured out just what he feels towards Iruka . . . wonderfully done. Hmm, will we see that one jealous kounichi again? What is she going to think when the confirmation that those two are actually in a relationship and not just for sex?
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November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*gasp . . . rolls on floor laughing . . .reaches up to type . . . * Oh my KAMI!!!! *falls back to floor* Okay, that was too much and I loved every moment of it, even the time I spent rolling on the floor. Loved that you put in Naruto's peers and Iruka's old students in there and everyone's reactions. Sakura was the least bothered out of all of them! Iruka and Kakashi made Genma drop his senbon!!! So many great parts to that chapter, wonderful comedy added in there. Loved everything about it.
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