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December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please reconsider continuing this aweinspiring story! I was at the edge of my seat from the first letter of chapter one to the last letter of chapter three and I would love to read more. Its amazingly written and flows smoothly. Others should read this to see what a top notch fanfiction looks like. And the fact that you had Sasuke getting slapped just made my day... Great job! >.<
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August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Delightful fluffy goodness - thank you~!
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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was so cool! it's like you tied up loose ends we didnt' even know were there! (leeneji / sasunaru) you totally rock, and this ended perfectly.
thank you for sharing!
thank you for sharing!
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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i'm sorry if it sounded like i WANTED you to end this fac after 3 chappies ... by all means, please continue if your muse directs you! ;-) but if you were to end it, it would still be a masterpiece.
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April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi - I am taking a break from reading the fabulous desk scene because I needed to tell you that the word "prone" means the face down position, and the word "supine" means the face up position. I see this mistake frequently, and your story was just so good, I had to share that one GLARING mistake with you. Otherwise your writing is very smooth and well done. OK, I am going back to the smut...ttfn!
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April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm wiping my eyes.
That ceremony was beautiful. It isn't often that a same-gender wedding ceremony is written into a fanfic, but you pulled it off effortlessly. There was again that careful balance of humor, angst and WAFF.
Do something for me. NO--do it for yourself. Finish this! It isn't finished. Commit to two more chapters. You can do it. You are an AMAZING fanfic writer. There is SO MUCH EMOTION piled into these three chapters, I just don't know how you do it! This is one of the most beautiful fanfics I have ever read, and indeed the best NejiNaru I have ever had the pleasure to read.
All the elements are there, right down to the gifted fanfic writer. Please FINISH THIS.
PLEASE.
That ceremony was beautiful. It isn't often that a same-gender wedding ceremony is written into a fanfic, but you pulled it off effortlessly. There was again that careful balance of humor, angst and WAFF.
Do something for me. NO--do it for yourself. Finish this! It isn't finished. Commit to two more chapters. You can do it. You are an AMAZING fanfic writer. There is SO MUCH EMOTION piled into these three chapters, I just don't know how you do it! This is one of the most beautiful fanfics I have ever read, and indeed the best NejiNaru I have ever had the pleasure to read.
All the elements are there, right down to the gifted fanfic writer. Please FINISH THIS.
PLEASE.
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April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, please, you've got to finish this fic. This is one of the sweetest most heartfelt NaruNeji fics I have ever read! It's just so darn sweet! It's the perfect mix of lemon and WAFF--with two of the hottest characters in the Naruto universe! Please do not abandon this!
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very hot scenes! oh i love it!!!
but you are soo going have to do a side story of sakura and itachi
but you are soo going have to do a side story of sakura and itachi
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a find! I wasn't expecting it to be so wonderfully written. You are truly a master of your craft. Lovef it ^_^
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAWWWWWWW!!!
This story is soooooo sweet.....AND HAWT AS HELL!!!
Its so gooooood!!
This story is soooooo sweet.....AND HAWT AS HELL!!!
Its so gooooood!!