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for Of Love and Laughter

by chilepie

person Twiggies
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God!

I love this story!
I love it when Neji's uke. xD
And they're so sweet to each other.
Making their fantasies true together. <3

Heheh, Neji would have looked so cute in a wedding dress. xDD
Thank God he didn't cut his hair. O_O
Neji does look really beautiful (and girly) with a long hair, he can't deny it. xD

I hope you keep writing!
You write really well, and I really love this story.
I can't wait to read the next chapter. xD
person Anon
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely loved it...I can only imagine what was in the bag
lol Sounds like your gonna make another chapter...*Hint* *Hint*
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You did a damn good job on this! NejiNaru is my favorite pairing next to GaaNaru! Are you gonna do a chapter about the ceremony? I really hope so, I would love to read more of this story...and the way Neji was with Mariko X3...Naruto and Neji should adopt, too!
person charmpit
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is beautiful. I like this AU where Itachi is a good guy and married to Sakura. I have seen a lot of ItaSaku fanfiction/fanart pairings and I am becoming more comfortable with the concept. This is also good because Sasuke is not even an afterthought in this story. Frankly, Sasuke is being overdone in the fandom (I always did like Itachi more than Sasuke). There are so many Kishimoto characters who are far more interesting and even more beautiful than Sasuke, but all hearts seem to beat for the youngest Uchiha.

Naruto and Neji make a brilliant pairing, even as brilliant as GaaNaru and ShikaNeji. Naruto is an expert at mining the humanity of others, so it's fitting that his prize in Naruto fanfiction is the most beautiful that it can offer. And Neji is nothing if not a priceless work of art that even shames the word beautiful.
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear gods, don't tell me he bought the veil?! On the wedding day? NEJI IS GOING TO KILL HIM!!!!
person Vivichan
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is a beautiful story, I did laugh out loud at some points, very very nice! I love your writing ^_^
person kataru
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
neji is really damned hot. Of course he can be hotter than sasUKE.
too bad, there's not much naruneji around. ahhuhuh~

ohwwowo, how about sidefic/prequel when naruto has just started and then there when peeps go chase him? XD
person kimmy
schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH MY CRACK-SMOKING-GRANMONKEY-ON-A-TRICYCLE!!!! I absofuckinglutly loved this fic. the lemon was hotter then the balls of a 1000 lb fat man at a tittybar eatting flaming hot chips and the ending was oh so....fluffy i acted the fangirl and gave a giggled shout (be proud of that since it was my first in a good long time). all in all the first sentence of the review says it all about my feelins toward this fic.
person qwerty
schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so SWEET! I LOVED it! There aren't enough Naruto/Neji out there. This was so good bad funny too. Great writing!
schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh...you made Neji so human!
Loved it! Also loved that you had Naruto turn down Sasuke.
Sex, fluff and a marriage perposal, gee it was good!