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October 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
AWWWW!!!! Loved it!!! I just can't... so sweet, totally OOC, but it was great!!! I loved them, the whole story, and the kids!!! And the humor, and strong Naruto, and killing the bad guys, and blue sharingan!!!
Thanks!
Thanks!
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October 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Okay, this is my PREreview... because while I like the story (I just started, so I won't use 'love' yet), there is just this one thing that makes me frustrated...
Why? Oh why do they call each other 'teme' and 'dobe'? Teme means you (in an offending way), so it's not fit to use to replace someone's name in certain situations (like replacing 'him'). While 'dobe' was something like dead last, or stupid (I'm not that sure, but close enough), and Sasuke by no means has any reason to call Naruto that. (Well it is better than the other case, but still not good enough!)
Calling Sasuke a bastard, or (more neutral) this guy would be better - I know the anime used the ones I'm upset about, and it's hard to translate, but for God's sake, if you try, you can find something suitable according to the actual story you write!!!
Sorry about that, I read manga, and the translators repeated so often the meaning, I just can't detach it - and this also makes me prefer the names the other way (Uchiha Sasuke, not Sasuke Uchiha), because japanese use the Surname first.
Anyway, if you already knew all this, then sorry about the rambling, but I had to write it out of myself, to be able to continue and enjoy the story!
Why? Oh why do they call each other 'teme' and 'dobe'? Teme means you (in an offending way), so it's not fit to use to replace someone's name in certain situations (like replacing 'him'). While 'dobe' was something like dead last, or stupid (I'm not that sure, but close enough), and Sasuke by no means has any reason to call Naruto that. (Well it is better than the other case, but still not good enough!)
Calling Sasuke a bastard, or (more neutral) this guy would be better - I know the anime used the ones I'm upset about, and it's hard to translate, but for God's sake, if you try, you can find something suitable according to the actual story you write!!!
Sorry about that, I read manga, and the translators repeated so often the meaning, I just can't detach it - and this also makes me prefer the names the other way (Uchiha Sasuke, not Sasuke Uchiha), because japanese use the Surname first.
Anyway, if you already knew all this, then sorry about the rambling, but I had to write it out of myself, to be able to continue and enjoy the story!
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July 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I can't remember if I've reviewed this story before, so I'm gonna take a moment to say I LOVE IT!!!!! Everything about this story is amazing, every single word.
And on that note, I wanted to see what you you thought about a sequel. Something with the Akatsuki wanting Kyuubi? And adding in some stuff with Ryuu and Kisho being a bit older, maybe in their pre-teens? It would be funny to see how Naruto and Sasuke handle their boys wanting to go on dates. ;D I think adding in more characters from Naruto, like the Akatsuki, would add some action and give us a peak into Naruto and Sasuke's lives a few years in the future. Just a thought. :D
Bottom line: I've read and reread this story so many times, I've lost count. I absolutely adore your writing style and I sincerely hope you write more, even if it's not about this particular story.
And on that note, I wanted to see what you you thought about a sequel. Something with the Akatsuki wanting Kyuubi? And adding in some stuff with Ryuu and Kisho being a bit older, maybe in their pre-teens? It would be funny to see how Naruto and Sasuke handle their boys wanting to go on dates. ;D I think adding in more characters from Naruto, like the Akatsuki, would add some action and give us a peak into Naruto and Sasuke's lives a few years in the future. Just a thought. :D
Bottom line: I've read and reread this story so many times, I've lost count. I absolutely adore your writing style and I sincerely hope you write more, even if it's not about this particular story.
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August 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was a great read and I loved it from beginnig to end. Since it was complete, I decided to leave this one review.
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April 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
omg...srsly loling while reading the parts with kiba...love your writing.. *continues with story*
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March 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ok, i don't know if you check your reviews on old stories but i thought i'd let you know that I really love this fic! I must have read it about 5 times already but i still love it. I also have a little request; could you please write another mpreg fic please? I would love it if you did 'cos your writing style is amazing and you somehow manage to keep Naruto and Sasuke in character, even with the craziest plots! lol thanks xXx
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November 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
so utterly cute. no other way to describe that, cool idea about making the babies able to talk to there parents. GOOD JOB!!!!!!!!!
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May 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This might be your first story but it's as amazing as your other stories! There's so many and much emotions running around on this story that they are palpable from this side of the screen. I CRIED reading this fic. I hardly ever cry. But when you started talking about babies and both Sasuke's and especially Naruto's love for them, I was crying like a waterfall. I couldn't help it. It was just so damn touching...
I don't know what else to say. You seem so sincire in your writing, like you have felt those feelings and experienced those happenings personally.
I liked the plot and loved the characters. The babies were adorable! (but I have to say, if I ever have children, I might love them more when they are still a part of me than when they're actually born...) I just simply adore this fic!
And now I'm off to read your other fics ;)
I don't know what else to say. You seem so sincire in your writing, like you have felt those feelings and experienced those happenings personally.
I liked the plot and loved the characters. The babies were adorable! (but I have to say, if I ever have children, I might love them more when they are still a part of me than when they're actually born...) I just simply adore this fic!
And now I'm off to read your other fics ;)
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May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
First re-read. Just absolute love!!! LOVE!
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January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Finally, just shy of 5 in the morning, I have finished this story and all I have to say it that it was fucking amazing!!!!!! I loved it!!! Thank you so much for writing this, you have officially made the list of one of my all-time favorite fanfic authors. Thank you so much for the wonderful story! I absolutely adore Sasuke's inner three year old and the chibis are so cute. An absolutely lovely story, and now if you'll excuse me, I have class in a few hours...