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AMAZING! Absolutely dramatic!

I love this story, I could not exit my computer to stop reading it. Full of romance, angst and humour. It's stunning. Please please update soon!

The babies are absolutely adorable and I was crying when the newborn touched Naruto's hand. So beautiful. I hope everything is alright in the end.

I can't wait for the next chapter.

DONT YOU DARE HURT HIM!!!!! GRRRRRR I WILL BE SO ANGRY, I WILL STOP READING...ok well maybe i cant do that cause curiosity will get the best of me but pllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaseeeeeeeeeeeee dont hurt him!!!!!

I just love this Fic...!@!!!!! I really do hate that snake bastard!!! Can't let nobody be happy....

I hope the baby would be ok..
OH, I LOVE that when you had their son speak to sasuke! That was freakin' awesome!!!

I seriously can't wait to read more!!!

waaaaaaahhh
poor little guy...
D:
but I'm so excited to see what happens next!
bring it on, baby
:D

I read this story in two sittings!!! It is amazingly complex, nuanced, and beautiful. Does Naruto have to loose his baby? The scence with Ryuu was genius :) I love evrything about your story- the descriptions, how you wrote all the side characters, and Sasuke/Naruto's relationship! Update soon; I can't wait to see what happens.

I loved it!!!! every chapter better than the last, please don't kill the new or naruto!!!!or sasuke or ryuu!!! Please let them leave in the end!!!
Can`t wait for the next chapter!!!! the most important thing I wanna say, even if there are thousands is HURRY UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!WRITE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sorry I know it's not so easy to write all in one go but I love it an d can't wait for the rest!!!!

::cries:: Awww! That was sad. Poor Naruto. At least the baby knew - and Ryuu is awesome. Very smart taking Naruto's chakra. :-) I really hope for another update soon! I love babies. ^_^ ~ Jelp

I don't know if you've heard the Shinedown song 45 or not but it just occured to me that it fits the most recent chapter very well. *shrugs* Just thought I share that.

Awww, not Sasuke and Naruto's youngest baby!!! That is so sad!! The part with baby Ryuu showing Sasuke his 12 year old self and talking to him was cute and sad. The kid's adorable!! Thanks for the new chapter!

O.O You are bad with cliffies! ::mutters, and you were talking about my cliffie:: Anyway, this is a review for Chapter 11 where Naruto randomly dissapears. Great chapter. Smut, angst, humor all rolled into one! I loved this part: "Looking up, he saw Naruto sitting calmly in the tree above his head, legs swinging. At that moment, the ‘Naruto’ caught in the sand turned into a chamber pot and exploded over Gaara and the nearby knights." I giggled, then realization really hit in, and went...eww...lol. Now, this probably wasn't meant to be funny, but it was because I misread it. It's the part where Naruto is talking about how many people are coming with Orochimaru. The exact line I misread was "Orochimaru, Itachi and twenty armed knights." I read it as Orochimar, Italy and twenty armed knights." So, apparently Italy is going to take the Uchiha castle! I was cracking up at myself. Thought I'd share. lol And I just liked how you ended the baby "reveal" scene. "And then, like on the proverbial Seventh Day, there was silence." That was great. :-) Good chapter. Going to go and read the next chapter - though I may not finish it all tonight. 'Tis past midnight. Thanks for the good chapter. ~ Jelp