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You evil, EVIL person. How dare you end with such a cliffy. lol. I love the story so far and can't wait for more.

OOOH DAMN YOU. You're SICK. All these cliffhangers. Oh I think I just developed an ulcer. DARN YOU!!! UPDATE OR SO HELP ME I WILL SHOW YOU THE WONDERS OF PAIN!!!! UPDATE I SAY UP FREAKING DATE!!!! Cute story by the way you made me cry.

I am really enjoying this fic. I would appreciate updates soon. Thanks and great work.


Angel

I actually thought the cliffhanger to chapter 11 was positively delicious, the paralleling of Sakura's rescue contrasting with Naruto's kidnapping all the more chilling.

Oh, Ryuu, what a fascinating blend of Uchiha and Uzumaki traits you are. The blue Sharingan was a delightful touch, highlighting the exceptional circumstances of his being alive. The fact that both children have dark hair and eyes was highly gratifying, seeing as those would be the dominant gene in both unions and most people like to play paper-dolls with offsprings' coloring.

I admit, I'm worried if we'll lose the precious burden Naruto currently harbors(cause I don't care what anyone says, even blessings can be a heavy weight, not to mention babies are technically parasitic, so...). I mean, it'd make perfect sense, but the emotional pain would be surreal.

Now, a brief overview of character analysis:
Sasuke: sexy beast out to kick ass and take names
Naruto: sensual imp and the universe's whipping boy, but damned if he'll make it easy
Orochimaru: scary beyond all reason; I mean, you can SMELL the crazy on 'im
Itachi: not any better, just kill the asshat

Thank you so much for uploading this story. Even though I haven't reviewed before, I've been reading this since you posted. That last chapter just really got to me. I was actually crying when Naruto held his unborn son and was comforting him. It showed how much he really cared for the little guy. You have really made all these characters your own and I commend you for the quality of your work. Though most people don't like them, I love it when you do cliff hangers. They make me want to read the next chapter that much more and you do them so well! Thanks again for this story and I can't wait till you post a new chapter!!!

I absolutely love this story! I only started reading it this week but I'm hooked. You write so well, keep up the good work.
Tereshi

oh no, are you really going to kill the unborn child? poor Naruto T-T

I was crying through out the whole chapter. I am still crying you meanie, lol

okay, so, we got the new chapter, but that is still an awful place to end it. not quite a cliffhanger, but still bad enough. i am hating you almost as much as i love you right about now. i can't wait to see how this will all turn out and i hope it goes on forever at the same time. i hope you decide to write lots more stuff once this is over.

Can't Wait To Read The Next Chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!