rate_review Reviews

To be honest that cliffhanger wasn't nearly as bad as the last one. Maybe I've just gotten used to them. Try to stay alive long enough to finish the next chapter, you never know what will happen with that angry mob you're taunting.

I cried so much reading this chapter. I really want to know what will happen next, but at the same time I am scared of what will happen to Naruto. I don't want him to lose the baby. I hope you write the next chapter soon. I can't stand the suspense.

I love this story please, please, please update!!!! the anticipation is killing me!

Oh no. Hurry, please, I need to know if everything works out OK. Please.

*screams* NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG...NEXT CHAPTER..SOON! That's an awful place to end that. *cries* the poor baby..poor Naru!

*whistles for pet dragon* Fang! Here boy! *pets head of 50 ft. tall red dragon* That's a good boy, now see all the angry people out there? Don't kill them but don't let them hurt the author 'kay boy? *fang rumbles and goes to play guard dragon while T.W. faces the author* Not that I'm not just as irritated as the rest of your readers for the evil cliffys but I know killing you will just end in an unfinished fic and we'll forever be haunted by Orochimaru's corrupted hiss. Plus I've done some truly sadistic cliffys myself so I know the pressure of an angry mob.

As for the past two chapters, MY GOD!!! INCREDIBLE I mean DAMN, first the answer to the proposal then, one helluva awesome lemon, followed by M-preg and of course you left us with that Itachi cliffy *growls* Then you pick it up with this chapter, Naruto 'talking' to his unborn baby, Ryuu having activated the Mangekyou (I love that it's blue by the way), Sasuke sending comfort to Naruto via clone, and Naruto essentially spiting in Itachi's metaphorical eye, YOU. ARE. AWESOME.

I feel it my duty however, to warn you, if Naruto miscarries due to snake slime's seal, all the dragons in the universe won't be able to save you from the angry mob, though Fang and I will certainly give it our best shot. Until next update (which I will be checking daily for) take care of yourself and feed Fang a fresh cow each day, that or a plot dust bunny he loves those.

*grabs pitchfork and torch* how dare u leave naruto to be goodness knows wat to the devil and his helper. please kami anyone get sasuke-kun there in time to rescue naru-kun and the lil chibi he has to get there or at least hav naruto kick orochimaru in the nuts sumthin lol. nah but seriously get naru the hell outta there. btw Ryuu is so adorable and amazing Ryuu u rawk! ^_^

absolutely fucking amazing! i love this story! blue sharingan, sooooo cool. i love the whole "i tried and it worked" and "i thought it would work that way and it did" situations :D naruto rules. please dont kill teh baby :(

ARGH!!!!! *gets strapped into a straight jacket* It's the goddamn authors fault for leaving me hanging!!!!

-Damp *GODDAMNIT!!! NOT ANOTHER FUCKING CLIFFIE!*

I love your story. It's brilliant. =]]