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for For the Love of His Son

by lexjamandme

person Kuronue
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*taking up the pitchfork and torch*
Give me more. Or else.
Thank you.

(On a totally related note, good writing, great story, please may Naruto, Sasuke, and their little brood be okay.)
(And they WILL be okay, won't they? ^_^)
person nawatia
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gyaaah!!!!! You had me crying!!!! I need the next chapter!!! Please?!!!
person Jelp
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww, cliffy. What will Naruto's answer be? (FYI, this is a review for chapter 10. I'm behind because my internet wasn't working right. I've been reading chapter 10 for what seems like forever.) Anyway, good chapter. Glad that there are two more chapters to move onto right away! Yay! ~ Jelp
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Speaking of unrelated notes, if it's alright with you for me to do it, could you ask your reviewer digiditz if I could take the idea of drawing a short comic strip of Sasuke's inner 3 year old and ran with it? Because it's playing in my head now.
Oh if you wanna e-mail me my e-addy is waterkat2001@yahoo.com
And yes there's more coming for What You Want soon.
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh you suck so bad. No more cliffies. And lets revisit that word 'impossible'. Maybe something like Naruto's pregnancy dissolving the affects of Orochimaru's seal and the baby will survive. I dunno, something good so the baby will survive. And I hope Sasuke gets there soon and kicks butt. And I hope Naruto gets to kill Orochimaru himself. And I hope they don't hurt him. And I hope for a lot more things but I think I'll end with just one more. I hope you update soon. Like this new update. This one came quickly (Thank you for that btw), so I hope the next does too. And yea, that's all.... woohoo :D
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Here, you can use my shield because you are going to need it unless you have really good reflexes and can duck all the things thrown at you. This story is good maybe too good...Can't stop being drawn into story...losing touch with reality. Oh heck, I'm going to kill Itachi myself. Where did I put that axe?!!!!
person Stacy
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story has to be the most heart felt, gripping, compassionate love story i have ever read. never have i been touch so deeply, to the point that i was crying over my laptop. even now i'm still crying. **hold on a second...i have to blow my nose** ok that's better. i understand now why this story has so many reviews. like all the other fans out there...i can't wait to find out what happens next!! the only thing left to say is THANK YOU" for a wonderful story!
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I KILL YOU I Swear ith Such suspense should not be free
person Alicia
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG please dont let anybody hurt Naruto! he's pregnant for god's sake! good story by the way
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
if you thought people were going to kill you for the last cliffhanger, you ought to be really worried this time around. i bet some are going to be out for blood. i, on the other hand, just sat slack-jawed in front of my computer for a full minute in disbelief before daming you and all cliffhangers to hell. i shall continue to curse you until we get another chapter. because cliffies like that are just. plain. WRONG!

on the plus side i am totally worshipping this story right now despite the mpreg which i usually avoid at all costs. did you sneak that mpreg warning in the summary or did i just not notice it? i am slowly being convinced you are evil. making me enjoy a mpreg story and killing me with cliffies.

that was a long assed review.