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January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is so awsome. I love it and can't wait to read more.
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January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omg. >_<
Cruel. Cruel is what you are.
Leave off at a point like that?
-_-" ^_^
Cruel. Cruel is what you are.
Leave off at a point like that?
-_-" ^_^
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January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMIgosh, I love this story so much!
I usually laugh when I read scenes when Naruto and Sasuke are so OOC
but I was really drawn into this story
and loved it immensly!
so, please update soon (even though you just updated XD)
the suspence is torture!
;D
I usually laugh when I read scenes when Naruto and Sasuke are so OOC
but I was really drawn into this story
and loved it immensly!
so, please update soon (even though you just updated XD)
the suspence is torture!
;D
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January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I will be watching for an update. This is a great story by the way.
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January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GAHHHH!!! Bad bad bad!!! You left us on a cliffy!!!
*cries*
*cries*
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January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love Sasuke's inner child...He had me dying!
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January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You think you had torches at the proposal cliffhanger?? I'm ready to throttle you for that one. OH I hope Naruto doesn't suffer too much. OH PLEASE NO MISCARRIAGE I have enough of that with My beta's work and other dark fics. And I have to say that damn lil 3 year old Uchiha is quite entertaining. Makes me wanna grab a stick and poke him in the belly lol. Update soon.
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January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think you meant to use writhing (can be good, or can be bad depending on the context - in this case reeeaaallly good) instead of withering (always bad) in the context used in the beginning of this last chapter (11)
Oh, and btw...I am pretending that the last sentence of chapter 11 does not exist.
Oh, and btw...I am pretending that the last sentence of chapter 11 does not exist.
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January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Those lemon scenes were so sweet and tender. You really are a good writer. However, if you thought the last cliffhanger got you in trouble then just wait till you see the fallout from this one.
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January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know it was coming but man WHY????? in that spot.
No pooooor Naruto. (Cries)
this was very good i look forward to your next update.
I can just see the mob after you. Hahahahahahahaha
No pooooor Naruto. (Cries)
this was very good i look forward to your next update.
I can just see the mob after you. Hahahahahahahaha