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January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Seeing this update excited me so much!! Wow such a beautiful chapter, filled with so many wonderful surprises. I'm so happy with how all this turned out!!
...but I was just waiting for the bomb to hit. That last sentence made my mouth hang open.
GREAT JOB, can't wait for the next chapter. HAPPY NEW YEARS! :))))
...but I was just waiting for the bomb to hit. That last sentence made my mouth hang open.
GREAT JOB, can't wait for the next chapter. HAPPY NEW YEARS! :))))
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January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I knew you were going to do something horrible to my emotions again and still I just had to read it. I have NEVER been this upset at a cliffhanger in my life. I think I've developed a crush on you. (I have a thing for evil genius) You may now consider me your official Internet Stalker.
And your little "joke" in the beginning with Sasuke's inner three year old and Tinkerbell sent me into a bout of hysterical laughter that may have finally convince my neighbors that I've lost my mind. I swear if I could draw there would be a comic strip with that scene followed by "current Susuke" beating up his inner three year old.
And your little "joke" in the beginning with Sasuke's inner three year old and Tinkerbell sent me into a bout of hysterical laughter that may have finally convince my neighbors that I've lost my mind. I swear if I could draw there would be a comic strip with that scene followed by "current Susuke" beating up his inner three year old.
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January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh God!!! Oh God!! *Glomps u* That was FanTASTIC!! LOL, I've only read up to the first set of xxxxx's but I really needed to stop and tell you how freaking happy I am. Melty, puddly, Giddy Happy!! That was the BEST Argument EVER!!! From here “And what about my precious person? Who will save him?", and everything after. I mean it! Let me make you an Uchiha and you can be as selfish as you wanna be!! - *Melt* - Then I will fight every one of them off, trust me, love me, marry me, God Naruto... Please - *PUDDLE* - Sasuke, stop. Yes of course I'll marry you! - *Giddy* (who could refuse that arguement!??). LOL, the whole thing made me ecstatic!!! And Sasuke's chibi... XD.... omg - So Freaking Adorable!!! Okay now back to the story!
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January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love It!!!!!!!!!! Can't Wait To Read The Next Chapter!!!!!! I'm Hooked On This Story!!!!
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January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh crap oh crap oh crap naru's preggers and missin and itachi is on the loose. omg omg i knw sasuke is FREAKIN the hell out. i do hope things go well 4 them. btwi luv the wedding so beautiful and touching. u r a good writer ^_^
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January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O.O Well now...! The plot thickens!! This story is so amazingly awesome!! How much do I love you?! Can you guess? (No really. I'd love to give you an exact amount but I was never that good at math. LOL) I can't wait for the next chapter!! Keep it comin' baby!
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January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL, well for all the excitement with the proposal cliffie, you definitely made up for it with the prompt delivery of a wedding XD. I loved the rush XD. The pace only added to the excitement and that's some beautifully skillful handling of Naruto's sexual situation.
But Omg!!!!! Nooo!!! You cannot, you crazy, persuasive bastard! Gah!!! Dammit, dammit!!! LOL. Yeah, you had me going. But it was okay XD. I'm really happy you made them wait XD, and observe all the regular customs. It's so very rare to see, and would probably be a little odd in a modern setting (I'd still love it though, lol). But it was absolutely wonderful in this. I really pity anyone on the other side of an argument with you, it'd be completely unfair.
Ahhh... you made one of the mistakes in the lemon that seems to be abundant in the fandom these days.
You confused writhe with whither or wither.
whither - to what state are we bound? whither are we going?
wither - become shrunken or shriveled from age or disease.
writhe - make continual twisting, squirming movements or contortions of the body.
I don't usually point this out, cause usually I could care less, but you write really beautifully and a mistake as simple as that, just feels wrong.
LMAO!!! Hinata!! "Honestly you're right that wasn't too hard" XD *dies*
I love that he's having a baby, the "normal" way this time *snicker* normal. But I have to point out if he can't use any chakra he needs to bring back the clones.
You're trying to kill me aren't you. This is exceedingly bad. You can't promise a baby and then drop him into a situation where he's almost 99% certain to lose it. *pulls out hair*
Aggh!! I'm sorry this review is really disjointed, I was gonna go back and finish it/fill in the blanks, but that ending... I need time. LOL *hugs* Thank you for the update it was really good, but I'm going to go have a conniption now.
But Omg!!!!! Nooo!!! You cannot, you crazy, persuasive bastard! Gah!!! Dammit, dammit!!! LOL. Yeah, you had me going. But it was okay XD. I'm really happy you made them wait XD, and observe all the regular customs. It's so very rare to see, and would probably be a little odd in a modern setting (I'd still love it though, lol). But it was absolutely wonderful in this. I really pity anyone on the other side of an argument with you, it'd be completely unfair.
Ahhh... you made one of the mistakes in the lemon that seems to be abundant in the fandom these days.
You confused writhe with whither or wither.
whither - to what state are we bound? whither are we going?
wither - become shrunken or shriveled from age or disease.
writhe - make continual twisting, squirming movements or contortions of the body.
I don't usually point this out, cause usually I could care less, but you write really beautifully and a mistake as simple as that, just feels wrong.
LMAO!!! Hinata!! "Honestly you're right that wasn't too hard" XD *dies*
I love that he's having a baby, the "normal" way this time *snicker* normal. But I have to point out if he can't use any chakra he needs to bring back the clones.
You're trying to kill me aren't you. This is exceedingly bad. You can't promise a baby and then drop him into a situation where he's almost 99% certain to lose it. *pulls out hair*
Aggh!! I'm sorry this review is really disjointed, I was gonna go back and finish it/fill in the blanks, but that ending... I need time. LOL *hugs* Thank you for the update it was really good, but I'm going to go have a conniption now.
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January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was such a wonderful chapter!! Until the end though!! You had to have something bad happen at the very end!! Poor Naruto!! I hope nothing happens to the baby he's carrying.
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January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no. a cliffie! i hates to know what itachi will have in store for poor naruto and their unborn child...please continue updating!
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January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DeJa Vu. can you spell it? because i can. i know because i just spelled it. but anyway... that is exactly what i am feeling right now... but your story is the most heart-felt story that i've ever read. you can look at it, and feel the emotions. and though, i've read several stories, i rank this one in the top 10. and they were good stories, from professionals, to amateurs. i commend you.. keep up the good work.