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for For the Love of His Son

by lexjamandme

schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Noooooo, Naruto. And he's pregnant and he can't fight back. And they might do something to hurt his baby and nooooooooooooooooo. You better update soon cause I want to see that Naruto's okay. Or mostly okay. Or at least alive and still pregnant. I hope they don't 'hurt' him anymore. Now that he's just started to get over it :'( Now that he's just started to get happy in his life and his new marriage. Grrrrrrrrrr I hope they get those bastards and I hope you update soon.
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Takes out the torch and lights up* What!!!! you dare make him disappear now that he's pregnant with Itachi around? Orochimaru presence supresses his chakra! That alone can make him lose the baby! come on! Dont be cruel! Nyah!!!! Not another bad news!!! I deserve a bit of happiness after so many tears... and so does he!!! you are evil!!! *cries* This chapter was beautiful and full of emotions... I was anxiously awaiting the second baby... but to have him disappear... please dont let him fall in their grasp again... please... no more!! *begs* More like... >.> <.< *.* ARRRRRRGGGGGGGHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! TO ARMS!!!! lets defend the blonde dobe with kittens!!!!! NYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*its your fault... *
person charmpit
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this AU where Sasuke is willing to openly express his feelings for Naruto and even marries him in a formal ceremony. I can't get enough of this fic! Thanks for posting new chapters so quickly.
schedule December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
no cliffy no cliffy no cliffy bad author very bad author *attempts to smack author's hand* no cliffy's especially when its getting good. i must know wat his answer will be gods please let him say yes i cant bear to see an emotional uchiha rampagaing through his castle becuz of a blonde hottie turning him down. no u must hav him say yes lol. ^_^
person digiditz
schedule December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are really messing with my emotions here. I absolutely love your story but you have the most annoying habit of ending with "perfect" cliffhangers. I'm not really sure how I feel about that.

Anyway, I eagerly await the next chapter and thank you again for writing this story.
person ikiku12
schedule December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know that I finally registered just to review your story. I absolutely love your story. I just read your latest chapter and loved it. Yet again you leave the reader with a VERY suspenseful cliff-hanger. It's OK, it just means that the next chapter will be even better than your last. I can't wait to be able to read your next installment. Keep up the good work, ikiku12.
schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gah! *flies backward* EVIL CLIFFIE! *claws back up to the computer screen and points* That is a truly evil cliffe!
I don't think I've reviewed this wonderful story yet *hangs head in shame* I'm a baaaaad girl for not reviewing yet. I read the first chapter of this story and got hooked, I check every day to see if you've updated. I love the way you've tweaked the Narutoverse and I love the way you deal with Sasuke's Uchihaness and I love...well pretty much the whole fliggering fic. There isn't a single thing I dislike about this story. I look forward to your next update and will be waiting not-so-patiently to read Naruto's answer to Sasuke's proposal.
person Hen
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was so awesome! This story just gets better and better! I hope Naruto says yes!
person Allys
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay so you're immensely evil and way fabulous all at the same time XD. I loved that to pieces and hope you can update soon. Sorry for the lack of content in here, but it's late and I'm beat ♥. I hope you enjoyed and still are enjoying your Christmas :).
person Avonne
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow this story is so great, and whoot for such a long chapter, but man that had to be the meanest cliffhanger, EVER. *dies*

CAN'T WAIT TILL YOU UPDATE. :D :D