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You had to didn't you. It was a great fic, undeniably cheesy at times, but still good. And then you added Mpreg. *facepalm*

I'll keep reading cause I want to know how this ends but still....ah basic biology, you've failed me again. XDDDDDDD

P.S. This isn't a flame. :D

Okay so. :composes self:

I'm glad I had chips with me as I read this so I could have something for all the CHEESE!! :o

Other then that...and the Mpreg. :facepalms: It was a great fic, thanks for writing it. :D

There are things you write that i just can't stop laughing or wondering about, I listed my favorites!

-"If silence is golden, then what happened next in the Uchiha courtyard was rainbow colored pandemonium." Where did you get that it's so poetic!

-"Who was the boy? What was he? Was that a baby? Why would the boy bring a baby? Does anyone know what happened to the last bag of chips? Okay, so not everything was “mysterious peasant boy brings small baby” orientated, but most was…. Honestly." lol

-"Naruto couldn’t make out what they were saying, but Orochimaru smiled (Naruto would have nightmares tonight) and Itachi lead the woman out the side doors and presumably to Itachi’s bedchamber." Having nightmares because Oro smiled haha

-"They circled each other like wild cats (don’t tell Kiba), each observing the other for weaknesses and attacking when they became clear." I love the kiba coment!

-"‘Shit, shit… shit, shit… shit, shit, shit…’
“Kit, is that the tune to ‘Twinkle, twinkle little Star’?”" I love how your mind works! So funny!

-"Sasuke’s response was a darker, more menacing glare. Oh, that the Uchiha’s in the heaven could see Sasuke now. The pride they would feel." I just love all theUchiha comments!

-"Sort of an Uchiha nonverbal communication for “discussion over, enjoy the couch.” " Well said!

Well that was amazing, if that was your first story I can't wait to see how your writting skills will be in a few years... Way to go! Your writing skills will conquer the planet yay!

omg i loved this story now i have tears in my eyes awww i LOVED this story dont ever stop writing!!

I LOVE YOU!!!!!! *sniff* that was the best story ive read in quite some time.. i can see why its on t.w.'s top ten... id say its in my top three. number two. you are an awesome writer and should be proud. you made me cry at one point and that is no easy task. i might check out anymore stories you may have, but not today. maybe later...maybe...

"tears running down the chin"... LOVE IT!!!

I've just finished your story for the millionth time and wanted to congradulate you once again on one of the most amazing stories I have ever read! I love it!

OMG!!!!! lex, you are a GENIUS, and i owe you an apology. i've read all your fics except this cause i thought it sounded corny. should have known something by you would be anything but corny *sniff sniff*. can you ever forgive me?

i read it all at one sitting practically and loved every minute, especially when sasuke got a hold of himself and was able to beat itachi rationally. ;-)

you rock!

I don't have an account on here, but I don on ff.net. I have reviewed before, but I just finished rereading it again. I enjoyed it just as much, if not more then, the first time. The story line is beautiful. It has everything: drama, tragety, romance, humor and adventure aans action. I truly do applaude(sp) you. Thank you again for writing this. Well...ja ne! Adeui! Ciao!

Ah, I enjoyed your story so so much. Sadly I don't have the time to review properly since I have to run now before I miss my train. But I really really liked it.
Thankyou.