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This story is frickin' great!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!

Oh man. I hope Sasuke kills that bastard!

This story is one of best I've read in a long time. I hope you plan to continue because I don't think I could stand another great story that goes unfinished.

just started to read this and i must say im luving the twist of this plot. its so good that you leave nothing out and in each chapter so far we learn more and more about naruto's past which i think is an excllent take on it. great job for that and lil ryuu im luv dat lil boy and i hope it acts like naruto a lil more than sasuke that would be funny and cute, an uchiha wit a sense of humor ^_^ anyway i praise you for this story since this is ur first attempt it is well developed. keep of the good job and cant wait to read more i find out wat happens next ^_^

Alright! More updates! And fast, no less!

The plot thickens...

Wow. That was really well written. Naruto's confession, Sasuke's reaction. Well done, it was amazingly poignant, the whole chapter really. Poignant mixed in with funny at the beginning. I really do love how you write. And um, so yeah... plotholes?? I think any holes you do have are actually pretty miniscule. So don't worry too much about it XD. *huggles* Thanks for the update.

Ok you anyone that rants at you for plot holes is an ass. Ok yea there is a plot hole but you can cover it up. How about Orochimaru put a very strong henge on the boy when Jiraiya would come to visit. And when he did meet Naruto the boy reminded him so much of the chibi that he decided to teach him a trick. Something like that it works. But please don't stop writing. I love this story and I can't wait to find out why the boy threw up. Did getting hit do that or is something wrong with Ryuu like colic or something? Update soon please!

each chapter has gotten better i love it just keep up the good work.

Oh come now darlin'. It's not as bad as all that. You haven't really confused anyone too much. Any plot holes you think you may have left are totally minor. Besides which, that's what the edit option is for. You can go back and fix anything you like. I know I'd read the whole thing over again after an editing. Heck I might read it over anyway. It's a good story. I certainly hope you don't give up writing. You wouldn't deprive us all of another good story would you? (puppy eyes)

Thank you for the new chapter!!! Poor Naruto!!! I'm glad he finally told Sasuke what his brother and Orochimaru did and that Sasuke gave Naruto the support and care he needed. I guess Tsunade and Jiraiya will stay to help protect Naruto?