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for For the Love of His Son

by lexjamandme

schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woah! Tense! You really know how to leave a reader hanging on the edge of their seat. I'm putty in your hands, dammit! It's a good thing you update pretty frequently. Great chapter!
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh! Naru-chan! Don't cry. Bad Tsunade bad! Need to see what happens next! Update soon.
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schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gods... this gets better and better... hot and hotter each day! I dont know what to do!!! I am biting my nails to the quick!!! I love this story!! I Dread the moment it ends so much!!!! NyaAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but its so gooodddd... I HATE OROCHIMARU and ITACHI... I hope they DIE!!!! did I mention I hope they DIE? good... the telephatic conection to baby Ryuu is so interesting... nyah!!! >.< I am rambling but I dont care!!! I love it!!
person charmpit
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating so quickly. This one is on my recommended reading list.
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
gah!! *dies* *reaches from beyond the grave* moooooooorrreee!! please *.*
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH DEAR LAWD PLEASE update soon. You can't just leave me like that. I mean damn if I was a man I would have mental blue balls. I almost fell out my seat then you hit me with a cliffie. So evil!
person Allys
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well okay then... LOL, umm... that was interesting XD. Gaara + Naruto = Big BANG! LOL XD. This is still really one of the sweetest stories ever. It's like I've Judith McNaught meets Naruto. I Love it. I agree with Shika, the clones were a great idea strategically. but LOl, Sasuke is so cute when he's all concerned. And the dinner table arrangement was absolutely fantastic. It made me really happen that Naruto brought joy. It's just so IC. The tiny stolen moments are wonderful too. I just feel kinda bad for Sasuke, when he finds out how Orochimaru and Itachi abused Naruto. He's not going to take it well at all. *pats his back* Thanks so much for the update sweetie ♥
person Jelp
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL Yes, I think Naruto and Gaara should talk before they kill each other. Oh, and your line "They hadn’t heard anything from Naruto’s clones, well except the one that had ‘poofed’ back after a rather nasty squirrel bite" had me laughing hysterically. Please update again soon! :-) ~ Jelp
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good story. I can't wait for more because, well I just can't! (smile)
schedule December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The tension is gonna kill me! nyah!!!!!! They are at each other's throats! GREAT! LOL!!!! I love it!! More and more each day!!! Good job! keep at it!!! nyah