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December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What the hell is this about? Hurry with the next chapter!!
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December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new chapter!! Good to see Gaara in the story!! I love how Naruto and Sasuke made up after their argument before. It was sweet! :)
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December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter! I can't wait to read more! I think Sasu/Naru need some quality time with theirselves and their baby! I think they should have a family picnic!!! hehe Well update soon!!!
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December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just when things were going so well between them. But, Sasuke did make a good point. I hope tney make up. Hurry with the next chapter!!
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December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! A little SasuNaru action! They make such a sweet little family... (sigh)I love this story!!
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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this. I usually go for a stronger Sasuke (supersuke!), but seeing him as a daddy is better. Really good job.
Though. I have to ask, is it really m-preg? It seems more...m-baby, to me. :D
Though. I have to ask, is it really m-preg? It seems more...m-baby, to me. :D
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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:-) Another really good chapter. Nice to see some romance finally developing. ~ Jelp
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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooh, naruto's getting a little feisty there at the end. and the kiss was so sweet. just the perfect happy little family! too bad things are going to get bad when oro and itachi decide to come be assholes. can't wait for the next update.
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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
XD *Swims in happiness and sweetness* This chapter made me smile *Hugs u* Thanks. Now that everything's out in the open, I can't help but wonder what's going to happen. I'm really happy about the relationship between Sasuke and Naruto and how it's progressing. The scene when they were just standing there staring at each other and had to kick Kiba out was precious. I also have to thank you for getting around one of my pet peeves in there, LOL. I always wonder how people write their character's throwing up and then forget about the clean up process, and then make them kiss people o.0!! LOL, I'm so squicked by that, so I have to be silly and say Thank God Naruto washed out his mouth and Sasuke didn't stick his tongue down his throat! LOL, I know I'm silly but yeah, it kinda skeeves me out. Guess I'm the one with the vivid imagination after all. LOL, can't believe you Hitchcocked me!!! LOL, That was excellent by the way ;). Oh and I also wanted to put my 2 cents in about the mangekyou. I think that if he tries to do it the fake way that a Henge/clone/genjutsu image would help, cause I think the change in the eyes also has to do with the actual imprinted image and the trauma that goes with it. Trauma does things to people's brains, so it stands to reason that that would be part of it. I also think that Sasuke can beat Itachi without the mangekyou, and well, I guess we're about to find out. Do you read the manga?? Anyway, this is still a lovely, charming and captivating story, that I can't wait to read more of. Thanks for writing it ♥
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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That parting shot... was brilliant! Very satisfying 6th chapter, nyah! Lovely action fluffy feelings... wonderful way to portray the characters developing attraction... nyah! Happy kitten!! YAY!!! I wait anxiously to know more!!! I really do hope they dont get a hold of another clone... and thank God you didnt include a daughter on the tortured couple mix... nyah! it was terrible enough as it was... Great job!