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for For the Love of His Son

by lexjamandme

schedule December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the long chapter!! I loved that it was almost all about Sasuke and Naruto. Naruto was mean though to Sasuke at the end, when Sasuke was just expressing his concern and caring about Naruto. But that's how Naruto is, stubborn and determined. :D Great chapter! :)
schedule December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOve your storu. Absolutely love it. Keep up the amazing work. I can't wait to see what happens
schedule December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very cool.can't wait for more.
=)
schedule December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was really good i'm i didn't mind the plot development. even if the end was...disturbing. can't wait for your next update!
person Mrs. Itachi Uchiha Yaoi Queen
schedule December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awsome!!!!
Its Just Awsome!^^
Pleaz Post The Mext Chapter Soon!
I Would Love To See More Of This Story!!^^
person Anon
schedule December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That's not good at all! What will they do now? Hurry with the next chapter!!
schedule December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter!!! Even though what Orochimaru and Itachi did was sick. But it shows how evil they are and dangerous to people that Naruto cares about. Poor Naruto having to get those memories. :(
person Allys
schedule December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Eeehhhhuuuueeeeewwwww!!!! *shudders* ick, eheh. Eeeewww. Okay so you've officially skeeved me out *fans* Poor baby *huggles Naruto* Poor cook and his wife :(. Naruto has to know that in the end the cook didn't mean it. But oh God! :( Yeah they're bastardly and you have a terribly vivid imagination XD. It's cool though, we were warned, and you didn't go into too many gory details. I enjoyed the chapter with all the dialogue and the gore. And yes plot building is essential. It's nice to know that now everybody's on the same page. Or at least almost everybody. Who gets to tell Naruto about his daddy?? I'm kind of excited about that, although he'll probably need a while before he can enjoy it. *Hugs u* Thank you so much for the update!! I'm loving this story to bits, you do not disappoint XD. I also love love LOVE the lengthy chapters XD. And now the shit is getting ready to hit the fan, so it should get even more interesting XD. Yay!! LOL, I can't wait. I hope you update soon, and well, a little something, something is always welcome XD. *chuu*
person Chria
schedule December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*cries* I really feel Naruto's pain. Damn bastards.
schedule December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I can't wait for more of this story. This is great!