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LOL, Okay so you're still killing me with the ends of chapters, but this one was just funny XD. And I have to take time out to say, that I love how you write Naruto. He's adorable and charming, and innocent, yet not at all girly, or helpless. *Glomps u* I think that's Fantastic. I'm usually an avid NaruSasu girl, but that's mainly because too many authors can't seem to make an uke Naruto that doesn't annoy the crap out of me. But I love yours. And it's so nice to have some variety. I just want to cuddle him into oblivion. And your Sasuke is fabulous as well. Still stoic and pensive, but not cruel or warped in anyway. I'm so happy. You write them so that I enjoy them both, and when new authors do that, I feel the need to praise them. Other than that the length of this chapter made me all puddly and happy. So satisfying. As for content, well honey I loved that too. I love that Naruto gets to be all mysterious and Ryuu's mum *holds heart*. I'm such a sucker for Naruto/Sasuke babies. You have no idea. And Hinata XD, I loved her input and your authors note, hehehe XD. Not to mention Choji and Ino - ♥. Shika, Kiba, I love them all. You write them wonderfully. And I Love, LOVE that Naruto still gets to be his most kick-ass and amazing self XD. *Huggles u till you beat me away with a stick* Thank you so much for the update sweetie, it so was nice to see this morning.

OMG, OMG... poor thing... LOL those expressions were priceless... nyah! It was so cute! LOL They coudnt believe their eyes! LOL... are you foreshadowing his rejection? I hope they wont treat him too bad when they know about kyuubi... from what you've stated Itachi and Orochimaru did a number on the poor kid... This story is getting so interesting... I am getting throughly hooked... I approve!!! not that you care... nyah! LOL keep at it!

cant wait for the next ch

Thanks for the new chapter!! It was funny how Naruto didn't realize that what he can do is impressive to others. Poor guy is afraid of rejection. Yep, Hinata is a hard character to write because of her constant stuttering.

can't wait to read more!

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this story very good i cannot wait to see what happens next.
it takes a lot to get me interested in a story and with this one i had to read tell there was no more

Ryuu, yay! though Chibi is sooo sweet. Man...that was crazy insane...the whole thing with Naruto and Itachi even though chuck are missing...i'm still getting the chills about it. I'm so happy chibi's safe though...and Sakura's dead. Tch...twisted sister... but since Naruto was a chakra donor does that mean chibi will like bond with him like he would with a mother? I mean I know he clingy now, but I just thought it was because he's only been with Naruto since birth...hmmm oh well I'm sure I'll find out soon enough...Go Get yo Man Sasuke!!

Ah awesome. I'll enjoy reading this now I've found it. :D

I was so anticipating this chapter!!! nyah!! great! happy kitten!!! *purrs* Can't wait to see what happens next!!!

Hey, no worries. We all have trouble now and then but you did great. Excellent chapter! Keep up the fabulous work.