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Thanks for the new chapter!! It was good to see how Naruto ended up with the baby and why he was with Orochimaru and Itachi. It's also cute how Naruto and Sasuke are acting towards each other. :)

So, that's what happened. Naruto was very brave indeed and saved both himself and Ryuu. What happens now and what's up with Sasuke? Hurry with the next chapter!!

Awwwwwwwwww, LOL, poor Sasuke, so confused *snicker* XD. YAY!!!!! LOL, I really should try not to be so happy about other people's confusion, but meh, it's a good confusion and it's terribly adorable. I love that you recounted the tale of how he got here. And ugghghh *squirms* am I reading too much into that or was Oro-bastard molesting my Naruto?? :(, ick, ick, ick XP. And Itachi too :(. Sasuke's gonna be really freaking pissed. Oh well he's in better hands now. I'm so excited to see what happens now, and I hope the next chapter gives you less trouble. You did excellently with this one despite that fact. I really like the babes name too, well done Naruto (or LOL, well done you XD). Thanks for the update love ♥

This is simply great! If what I think happened to Naruto really did happen, I think there is going to be a really unusual twist later on.

Awww, the end of the chapter was sweet. During Sakura's childbirth scene, I totally had a mental image of Naruto just crouching there with a catcher's glove in his hand, waiting to catch little Ryuu as he popped out of Sakura. I hope you update again soon! :-) ~ Jelp

AWESOME JOB!!!!

"Naruto turned until his cheek rested against Sasuke’s heart, his breathing evened out and Naruto fell asleep. Sasuke looked down and felt his heart clinch. This moment could be from his childhood dreams. Him sitting against the headboard of his bed, his newly named son asleep beside him while the mother of his child, exhausted, curled up in his arms and slept soundly."

That is one great paragraph.

I want a happy ending for Naruto! He deserves it!

next ch please

Sakura is what?!?! NO way?!? Okay she was wicked all the way, but what happen to her?! crazy....and naruto's nanny skills are so sweet! That was a quick update too! wow looking forward to the next chapter! great job ^^

What is with the endings of these chapter!!!??? GAH!! You're driving me crazy *Bangs head on desk* LOL, XD, But I really REALLY love this story!! It makes me feel all warm and fuzzy, God I could just see Naruto and Sasuke with that baby!! And this is the first time I don't mind the English Lord setting, but that's probably because - Everyone still has their Powers!!! XD. You have no idea how much that makes me happy!! LOL, THANK YOU!!! But God, please update soon *puppy dog eyes* Cause the cliffies are really detrimental to my health, LOL, I'm just really glad that by the time I got to this the second chapter was already up XD *HUGS* Wonderful job keep up the good work ♥.