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for For the Love of His Son

by lexjamandme

person FoxxyRed
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story, please update soon I can't wait until the next chapter!
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, hate to say this :D, but it's good that Sakura is dead. Glad that Naruto is awake now and he and Sasuke can get to know each other. I'm also looking forward to finding out what happened to Naruto. Thanks for the new chapter!!
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God! This is a wondeful story so far and i hope that you continue it, it made laugh, get angry, cry and evrythign you did a great job!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please continue.
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well there is a happy ending to this... the pink haired one is dead. She should be happy now. This is a great story and I'll be hanging on for every chapter you write.
person kati
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is very well written and amusing
person Jadebyrd
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If only everyone could update as fast as you...wow! Well I am happy to see that Naruto is all better, and I also found Naruto's protectiveness of the baby very endearing. It was very amusing the way he automatically reacted to the baby's crying and in turn the baby recognizes Naruto as a potential parental figure/source of comfort. I must also say that Sasuke's slight jealousy over the baby is pretty funny too. It seems he is more concerned over the fact that Naruto's attention was more on the baby rather than himself. I must say, you've got me real stumped as to what Hinata was about to say about the baby before Naruto's 'oh-so-lavish' entrance.....that is a feat in itself seeing as to how I'm am usually very good at foreseeing future occurrences. All in all, I think you have a really good story going here and I cannot wait to see how you choose to progress it!

-Jenn
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaaaaw that's soooooo sweet! You made me smile. ^.^ So did he kill her himself? Huh? Huh? Did he? (Cause I wouldn't have minded doing it with my bare hands. The Bitch.) Or did Itachi do it 'cause she was used goods? I also want to know what Hinata was going to say. So keep going, Please! Nifty updating skillz by the way. XD
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, this is fantastic! I can't wait for the next chapter.
person hisoka
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow..thats a turn of events right there.didnt think shed die before she actually said something(not a flashback).wonder what happened,is he gonna let naruto stay and help take care of the nameless baby,then again he cant kick him out if they bring the baby to him everytime its sad etc.hope you can update soon
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Egads... if I were fish I would be hooked! I want more! Pretty please...? This is good! Intriguing storyline... good images... just perfect! Just had to read it twice... its great! Really enjoyable read! The kind of thing you dont want to miss... you give little tidbits that seem important... cruel... yeah! Lovely story... lots of promise, I will be waiting for an update!