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for For the Love of His Son

by lexjamandme

person Jelp
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww. Chibi. I like it. So cute. :-) Please continue soon! ~ Jelp
person Mort
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I know Sakura would not be the total bitch people make out to be- sh matured a lot through out the anime- But I can't say I am sorry to see your Sakura go.....to hell-
This is great, I can't wait for the next chapter-
person Hen
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. This is great. Please continue.
person Jelp
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.O I said update and you did. That was fast. lol ^_^ Hmm, a cliffy with Sakura apparently dead. Cute little baby, and nuturing Naruto. Awww. Hmm, maybe it will work again if I say "update again soon" pretty please? :-) ~ Jelp
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am seriously loving this story. Its so cute how Naruto went on auto pilot when the baby cried. Will Chibi be his name permanently and what was Hinata about to tell Sasuke. I am soooo curious. Please update soon.
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fucking awesome chapter! Can't wait for more!
schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHH! need to know more. I need more. Wow, after one chapter I'm already addicted. Please hurry with the next chapter.

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schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! that was great!!! please, please continue this very soon, I will be checking back daily for posts!!
schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A very good first chapter. Please keep going this is really interesting.
schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh this was a great beginning I almost wished it had been an one shot so I could find out what happened next. I hope you update very soon. I can't wait to see what happens next.