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November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think I am addicted to your stories. lol It tood me a few days to actually find the time to sit down and read this, but I'm glad I did. I really liked this fic, and as long as you keep writing, I'll keep reading. ^_^
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November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ya know the end sort of reminded me of Buffy's 'I'm cookie dough' speech, not a plagerized way but the sentiment behind it. This was really well done and a great read.
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November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was great = unique, realistic and engaging~! I actually learned something too.
One thing, which as the author you can, of course, ignore but as a reader, I find your comments in the middle of the story action distracting. They pull me out of the world you're creating. Maybe footnotes instead? Just a thought...
One thing, which as the author you can, of course, ignore but as a reader, I find your comments in the middle of the story action distracting. They pull me out of the world you're creating. Maybe footnotes instead? Just a thought...
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November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you!!!! As I was reading this, I was listening to Haunted by Evanescense, and letting the tears flow freely. I really appreciate you for writing this and am in awe at how much Naruto favors me. Especially the part where he finally goes off on Sasuke. Maybe we are better off alone??! Thanks again!