rate_review Reviews

thats great! will you write next chapter?

Good story though it's kind of unrealistic how Pein and Konan weren't interrogated and/or killed immediately.

Would it be too much to ask for another chapter and a relatively happier ending? *Wide puppy eyes*

I really hope that you continue this because I love the way you depict the aftermath of a defeated pein.

Since I have been enjoying "Dirty Little Secret" so much, I decided to read some of your other stories...I just have to say that I wish you would continue this one as well. I really love your writing. It is dark and full of emotion, but you don't drag the "internal angst" on and on as some of the other authors do. I sometimes feel as though I shouldn't be critiquing anyone since I don't write myself, but I do know what I like to read and I can't get enough of your fiction...I promise I am not a stalker or anything, but maybe just a little selfish in wanting more...Ya know? Thanks anyway.

If I wasn't such a sucker for beautiful, well-written suffering of a certain Akatsuki leader and his lovely companion, I would probably be annoyed at the characterization of Konoha's higher-ups. Yes, most are bastards, but I still can't quite see them stooping to that level of cruelty and condemning even the most hateful of criminals to be raped. Otherwise though, beautiful work. I like how you characterize Jiraiya especially!

Odd... very weird. Kind of a sick, perverted, twisted version of the Leaf Village. Are going to continue? Not sure how true to the characters you are... too hard to even envision Tsunade acting anything like that... maybe in a alternate universe.

Hey

Sooo~ I read the beginnings of this story and i had to create an account just to review ist 'cause i think you deserve it.
I was kind of... sceptical when i first read the summary. Didn't quite believe that this setting (with an humble, abused -by konoha for god's sake!- Pein) could work out the way it did. But well i like Pein and i totally adore what you do here, although it seems strange at first. You know: Konoha being the "bad guys", humiliating their captives and so on. But well... *g*
Over all, though, it's quite believable and i love how you describe the feelings and utter despair of your characters.
I'm really looking forward to find out what will happen next.
Oh and there frankly aren't enough stories out there with Jiraiya in it!
Please keep up.
Kudos!

The Fallen is a good story.