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for Symphony Paradise

by Leowen

person aisuru02
schedule April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I have to admit, I had rather tearfully given up on this story being updated, so I was absolutely elated when I saw that it was updated! I'm so happy! ^_^ I hope you'll continue it more. Its really nice to see a story about Naruto and Sakura after they've already gotten together; most focus on developing the relationship.
For your survey, I normally assume a female author, probably because I'm female, and I'd say for age somewhere in the late 20s.
Thanks for updating! Aisuru
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story can't wait for the next chapter. As for the Questions I think you a male maybe early 20s.
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not to bad but I wish you will have more sex part with your other pairings.I like what you did to Ino.Are you going to make a lemon with Ino and Choji? you be the first person I seen that does a fat lemon.
person anubite
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fairly amusing, though, the chapter felt a little... filler-y. I hope there's a larger plot to this, other than "Naruto and Sakura are married... but can't have children".

You're likely female, since you focus more on the female perspective (plus, your thoughts on character and uniqueness are focused on relationships – which is psychologically typical of a female, a male would say forging identity is more singular and less collective).

You're probably early to late twenties considering you're writing about married life (a peaceful marriage too – Konoha's not in any wars and Sakura is perfectly satisfied with her bumbling but endearing husband). Most adolescents would write about characters forging their identities, rather than living them. An older person would probably not be interested in Naruto, let alone Naruto fanfiction. An older person would also likely put more conflicts in Sakura's and Naruto's marriage, since they're more likely to draw from experience.

Of course, I'm stereotyping – but, it is /likely/ that you are all these things, not certain.
person s8young
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OK,(sigh) this is my tenth time looking at the FANFIC since ch 2 and i still haven't seen a chapter 3!!!!! Come ON!!!! How Long Do we Have to Wait for another chapter!?!?!?! 2 more months!?!?!?! Update ASAP!!!!!!!
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG MORE MORE! *clapping from ALL my naruto loving friends!*
person s8young
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!!! Keep Going!!! Please update soon.
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
All right you made another one. I cant wait to see how they all trun out in the ten year. Its sad about Sakura and Naruto cant have kids.Please update soon.
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent first Chapter. I am so enjoying your work! Keep it up!
person zeroharm
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice to see the sequel up... seems a bit angsty, but for a good reason :-) Looking forward to the next chapter.