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by nlightnd

person tillean
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think that you should continue this story, I'm sure that as you progress you will gain a following of readers. ^_^v
person ixxora
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! you have got to continue! I love the storyline..
Although it's hard to believe that there are real people who exist like Masan..are there??
Wow the cruelty..hahaha

CONTINUE..ONEGAI!!!
person namouri
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really liked the story. and the fact that sakrua nd kakashi already had history together. gave the story a little more too it, especially since its still a mystery of how they got together, and how they broke up. i love the plot, and i think it would be awesome if you kept this story going. ^^
person anon
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is absolutely horrible.
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is great. I like the story, your grammar and spelling are great. The lemon is fine. I have no skill in writing lemons, limes, or any other citrus. I think this story is great. I enjoyed it. Don't listen to that anonymous reviewer. You have always written wonderful stories. I will be waiting for the next chapter. I really want that Masan (?) B***H to get hers. Nothing like Karma to balance things out.