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for Back to School

by exo88

schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the title of chapter 13 made me giggle...

i love this story!!! X3 wanna know what happens next.... ^^;

and OMG shika should become a marriage counselor... XD
can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome. Poor Naru-chan morning the loss of the ramen. I love Naughty Iruka.
'He bit his lower lip, considering it, and finally smiled wickedly. ”Let's do it."'
That was sooooooo funny. I guess he wants to reclaim his desk. tehee!
Can't wait to read more.
=)
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You cheeky monkey you LOL. I am gonna report you to the local authorities for repeatedly allowing an innocent desk to be violated in such a way. What the hell is it a sex desk? LOL. And all I can do is look like this O.o when Naruto realized he was in pain. I think I did that before mostly I just get a Cheshire cat smile on my face w hile I tremble all over. Scares the bejeesus out my fam. LOL oh well update soon. Glad my trauma YOU caused entertained you HMPH!
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I haven't commented on this in forever!!! I'm soooo sorry! I've just been busy with birthday stuff, getting things ready for Christmas, and a bunch of other things.

I love all of the scenes where Chouji is acting like he is watching a Soap Opera or something, I can totally see him doing that. lol Poor Iruka and his desk, I hope he gets to solve his problem soon. ^_^ Nice job on the lemons too. It was getting pretty warm in here. XD
person Vibora
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn, this fic is so cute xD
i love it
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are...brilliant!
person Chria
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Shika chuckled dryly. ”What do I need a woman for when I have a wife as good as you?” Best comeback EVer! All win! LOL I love the entire series of Back to School. It's silly and sexxy at times. My fave combo. Much love~
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yooo i been gone for a WHILE. was surprised to find out sasuke also spoke to shika about the issue maaann wonder what that must have been like ha! Story came along very well though, good job, only thiiiinnnggg, i've seen this several times so i'm starting to think it's a spell check issue buuuuttt its 'prosTATE' not 'prosTRATE' prostrate is an adjective or a verb something, totally different word
person Koji
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! Kaka and Iruka are gonna get their freak on!!

This chappy was really, really sweet. Just socute and precious. The cuddling was adorable!! You described it well.

Its just a short review this time 'cause I'm ill, but this update made me feel a little more human XD

...Is Shika gonna be in the next one...? Just wondering, not like I'm obsessive...or anything...nope...

<33333333333333 4 U and your wonderful storiiiiiiiiiieeeeeeeez

xxx
person Koji
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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The sex.

The sexy, sexy sex. Wowzers, honestly.

It was simple, and kinda understated, but it gave you a chance to visualise it. I could, like, see it, if that makes sense, and it was HELLA hot!!

THIS was awesome, in all senses, or something...my God, I can't really think properly right now...I'll have to go back and re-read...yes, that's a very good idea...clever me...

Oooh! And the !!TENSION!! of the staring match!! Lmao, and Chouji's inner monologue "his hot body" - awesome!!

Ugh...the sex keeps coming back to me...I'mma have to go read it again...

I love Shika and THIS STORYYYYYYYYYY!!!!! yes I do. Eww...but Temari is coming through? Can she, like, not? She may get in Shika's way...and we don't want that!!

p.s. (Love you!!)

xxx