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by exo88

person kati
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lmao IM GAY FOR UCHIHA SASUKE!!! ><
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, two chapters since I've last been online. Hmmmm, I wonder what Iruka was up to. XD He also seemed to know what really happened to the cd player. That last line just floored me. lol Luckily, I'm reading this during the day instead of at night like I usually do. I would have woken up everyone in the house. ^_^
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*squeal* the gayness yay!!! naruto said it...but its so nice he doesn't have to feel all shy and flutters because he has no clue he's even doing it! awww i think that's the best kind! Poor hinata so close and yet so far....HAHA! THEM THE BRAKES SNOW EYES!!! MWHAHAHAHA! sorry....slipped hehe...okay love fest now we're talkin!
person Kodos
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Freezed" is not a word! The past tense of "freeze" is froze, and its participle is frozen, 'kay? Stop saying people 'freezed'; it's irritating and distracting. Anyway, I am enjoying the story, despite its ridiculousness. I look forward to your next update. :D
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love that last line... and the whole story :D
You've captured the characters so well that it's no stretch to imagine them acting and reacting as they do (which, I have to say, isn't true of some of the other stories I've read). Can't wait for more!

Oh, and for the record, this is the first review I've ever written... feel special :P :D
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL I really wanted to do a SasuNaru with the upcoming story but somehow it got turned into a HakuNaru LOL. Whats up with all these kukukuk and fufufufu??? I keep seeing that. But anyways poor Naruto this is so funny. I wish it was animated LOL *thinks about and gets a nosebleed* @.@ then again.
person Sugary
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This story is really funny. Hilarious actually. I really liked Shikamaru dramatic speech to Naruto. I can't wait until Naruto finds out that Sasuke is using a perfume as some sort of a libido booster. I can't wait to see what happens next!
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cool chapter can't wait for more! I wonder who Naruto is going to bother next? Hhmmm. I'll guess I'll just wait and see.
=)
person Koji
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOO!!!! Chouji is so mean! But I fucking love his reactions to Naruto's problems. I can totaly see him slobbing around, hyper-snacking and watching crappy daytime soaps. But...teh poor Shika arm...

I loved how you portrayed Neji. You got him so well! And Lee was fantastic too, but I always love him anyway...

Kay...here we go again...

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...I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I feel so naughty for taking up so much space :D

I'll be waiting for the next installment. And as long as you keep writing, I'll keep reading. Promises XD

...but it'd be nice to get Shika back...poor-one-armed-not-allowed-to-smoke-sexy-man...ahh well!!

xxx
person tash1021
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love it poor shika
please continue