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by exo88

schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* Another cliff hanger!! Shame on you! ^_^ Poor Shika, it almost seems as if you enjoy finding ways to torment him. Oh, when Naruto was sneaking around...it made me want to bust out singing "Secret Agent Man". lol That was the first thing that popped into my head.
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
naughty sasuke! mind controlling naruto into having relations with you, tsk tsk. break free naruto! break free from the shackles of sexy brunette mind control! (hehe shika isn't the only 1 who can be 'stylish') Oh and after you break free, dont forget to jus let him continue molesting u anyway :D you know u lika hiiiimm
person Koji
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! wowies...I don't have to say how much I love it again, do I? I'm sure you know already...I LOVE IT THIIIIIIIIIIIS MUCH!!!!

"And how the HELL did he find him?! (...and why is he dressed?) - Utter. Fucking. Genius. I swear to you (I'm not adressing God anymore ;p your ficcis are better)

Hehe...Shika got caught...yeah, I'm in love with him btw, in case you hadn't noticed...

I'm not gonna beg for the next one 'cause I get the feeling you enjoy writing this (which makes it even better), so I know it'll be soon.

xxx
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh you kinky tease. I am kinda the opposite I can see so many Seme for Naruto but no one with Sasuke BUT Naruto. I am sorry I haven't had the chance to write a SasuNaru cause everytime I try someone asks for something else. My one shots weren't even for me. And my beta threatens to go on strike if I write a SasuNaru actually my next story was suppose to be a SasuNaru but she threatened then my readers voted for Haku. I'm sorry but I tend to lean to SasuNaru in Upsilon Kappa Epsilon. I have over 20 doujinshi with those two. I love them * puts up a SasuNaru sign up followed by GaaNaru NejiNaru and MenmaNaru (cough) * Loving the story I can literally see Naruto all jittery. LOL
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naru....I hope he's gonna be okay...and I hope he figures out what's sasuke doing to him and how...poor little blond. Hehe some great help Shika!
person tash1021
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHH this is so good update update update!!!:P
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay for Anti-Smoking Chouji!!! lol Ok, enough of that...I KNEW that was what the radio was for. Too bad it crashed the "party" so to speak. (it was just getting good ^_^) BTW, your daisies are really pretty.
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
can't wait to read more.

=)
person Koji
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOOOOO!!!!! I'm too happy with this chapter!!

Chouji stealing Shika's cigs was great! Reminds me of my friend, always saying 'for your health!' I love how Shika just doesn't even try that much to get them back. And assuming it's the sharingan, nice touch. Sasuke displaying emotion (the blushing) was cool. I can see it really happening; him composing himself before letting anyone see it.

I wonder what'll happen next? Maybe Shika will get a little too curious and check it out for himself? Hmm...maybe Naruto will learn to like it?

Gah! I don't know!

Anyways, it's fantastical! Keep on!

xxx
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HEY DARN IT if I gotta think with that darn story of mine then so do you LOL. I actually need to update soon. What do you mean I wait your updates too? Of course I do I get happy when I see the update and its only the 3rd chapter. This is the silliest thing in the world I love it. I hate angst too but I keep getting forced into it against my will. Thanks for the clue on whats going on. I like that he hasn't gone off but Sasuke is kind of a whore huh. Kinky ass LOL good chapter.