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by exo88

schedule November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw man, a cliffy. I LOVED the ShikaChou BFF moment...it was super CUTE!! More please. lol
schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm truly looking forward to reading more of this story. Nice start.
schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That... had me at first but now it feels incredibly abrupt and unresolved. I don't think it's a concept that can be hustled into a oneshot, or at least not such a short one.
person Koji
schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAY!!!

I'll cherish my daisy, thank you. And that was great! Hehehe, Sasuke's soooo evil!

The Shika/Chouji moment was adorable ^^

xxx
schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant. I'm enthralled , truly. This story just jumped up to one of my most anticipated. I hope poor Naru-chan can come to terms with things...and that sasuke gets his ass kicked for practically raping the pretty little fox boy. Keep up the good work.
schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL This is silly I love it. But you are gonna need to help me out for a second. Is this gonna be slightly AU? Or what time frame. How old are they and does Sasuke just lust for Naruto or does he have a thing for him? Sorry if I'm asking too much I just really like this story so far. Poor Kabuto and his leg LOL. I wanna know what happened in that room. I patiently await your Update but not too patient I hope to see a new chapter in less than 5 months. I have actually had to wait a few months before to see an update! JA!! Thanks fa the flower by the way!
person kati
schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
>< this is soooooo hot (haha and funny) i really like sasuke in this but i had one 'OH NO SHE DIDNT' moment whilst reading this... you basically said that nruto had no brain activity. now, as crazy naruto fangirl (and proud of it), i must protest. NARUTO IS NOT STUPID! MEH! ><
schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
tell us tell us! a cd player????? *confuzled* what could he have possibly thought up involving a cd player... did he manage to go through with the act a second time or did naruto manage to escape?? questions questions! answer soon!
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol This was great. I can't wait to read more.
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooohh i like your style of writing and the storyline most def has tons of potential, i cant believe it was EVER going to be a oneshot *gasp*